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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Grins* Your welcome! I love your story so far and this chapter was good too, this plot has good potential and I can't wait to see where you go with this story... I say it's really good for basically your first fanfiction... the first thing I ever wrote was horrifing! I don't think anyone would have been able to read it without confusion and hair plulling! Lots of confusion so I took it off and read books and other fanfictions as well as writting lost of short stories trying to perfect my writing... and that when I came up with my first fic (you could find that at FF.net) but yours is a lot better then my 'first'... so I say keep up with the good work!!!! ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good second chapter! I wonder whats gonna happen between Inuyasha and Kagome (Kikyou), that was a good way to end it too... Whelps anyways, can't wait to see the next instalment ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start, I can't wait to see what you do with the story... the little piece that you wrote has me intrested though and I hope you keep with it. I like the song too ~Zonza
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