| "Past, Present, Future" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 08:37 CST
Comment/Review:
its a little fast-paced.....oh well! =D
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heyla! Thank you for reveiwing!!! And I think this story is awsome!! I'm having a bit of a writers block too! I can't wait till you update. I'm so curious
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Reviewed By: silveredge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 10:23 CST
Comment/Review:
*twitch... twitch...* godamnit... *twitch... twitch* writers block...
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Reviewed By: silveredge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 14:01 CST
Comment/Review:
good story update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I like readihng this story. I hope you up date so.
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Reviewed By: Hellokitty_4_ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
Don't worry. I'll continue to review. First There's two i's in the japenese word Jii-chan or that's what i see in most stories. And the iron reverse soul stealer attack's spelling is uncorrect... i think. I'm sure on the grandpa spelling but not that attack. And just to tell you... Miroku is a hentai (Pervert in Japanese) ANd Inuyasha's a baka (stupid) like destiny ash or sould i say destiny Ass. She's horrible. She truly is an ass. She called me stupid when i got all As and she got horri grades. If i find any more japanese words I'll let you know.
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Title: thanks for the review
Reviewed By: whiteshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for reviewing! Your story is great, so keep up the good work! Thanks again for reviewing!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh? Don't stop, you just gotta figure where you want the story to go. You already have your beginning, now you've got to figure out how you want it to end or at lest something close to an ending -like an idea of it- and when you've got that you've only got to write chapters with events that lead up to your goal ending... All you gotta to do is figure out where you want to go with the story... You shouln't stop writting because of lack in reviews, some people are just lazy... by how many people have been visiting your story you can tell many are reading it... I know that it is nice to hear the opinions of your readers, but you've have to keep with it. Through the progress of your story I can see a lot of improvement in your writting and when you finish it you'll be a whole lot better at it then when you started... trust me ^_^ It's a very rewarding feeling when you finish a story that you've been working on for such a long time. I hope that you keep at it and keep up the good work, eagerly awaiting your next update ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 17:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww..this story is a cute!!! please keep up with it!
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Two chapters since I last checked! Both good and well written, though they show some improvement comapared to the last ones ^__^ Good job! Again I think I'm going to really enjoy reading this story as it progesses... ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: NHG On: October 22, 2004 19:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon, like the plot
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: October 22, 2004 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I like your story but I'm not really a fan of kikyou and I think it would be better if you focus on inu-kag :)
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Grins* Your welcome! I love your story so far and this chapter was good too, this plot has good potential and I can't wait to see where you go with this story... I say it's really good for basically your first fanfiction... the first thing I ever wrote was horrifing! I don't think anyone would have been able to read it without confusion and hair plulling! Lots of confusion so I took it off and read books and other fanfictions as well as writting lost of short stories trying to perfect my writing... and that when I came up with my first fic (you could find that at FF.net) but yours is a lot better then my 'first'... so I say keep up with the good work!!!! ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good second chapter! I wonder whats gonna happen between Inuyasha and Kagome (Kikyou), that was a good way to end it too... Whelps anyways, can't wait to see the next instalment ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start, I can't wait to see what you do with the story... the little piece that you wrote has me intrested though and I hope you keep with it. I like the song too ~Zonza
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