Title: More detail!!
Reviewed By: Ronin_gatekeeper On: March 16, 2005 21:14 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a really neat idea, but the only thing that i don't like is that the author doesn't add any detail, it's as if one wanted to write it in a hurry and scribbled down stuff. i recommend a rewrite where you add more detail. like the fight scene, 'and then karou showed up'otherwise i like it
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