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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 16, 2005 18:23 CST
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intereting... I wonder what the letter said...
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Reviewed By: khaosfire On: February 16, 2005 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was a great read. It was really long (yay!) and I couldn't stop reading!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:44 CST
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Yes... slowly, things are coming together, though I must say your basically torturing Hermoine... I find this amusing. I like how you are keeping her with muggle views, like the one's on demon's, after all, she would have been raised before ever hearing about Hogwarts to be practical... or maybe she just didn't bother believing. But either way, I predict a major view change is going to come in the next couple of chapters, for Hermoine at least. Not all of us have been able to get ahold of the end of the series yet... though I can't wait, as that part 'bout the tabloids sounds amusing. Very amusing.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared ^^ On: January 15, 2005 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I must say I'm thrilled to see another chapter for this story. The way you play with the individual characters is highly entertaining. A few points I want to make sure not to forget: 1) I thought you did a very good job with Hagrid's crooked English so don't worry about that. 2) In this chapter you mentioned 7th year Slytherins and it sounded as though you were refering to Malfoy, Harry, etc. But in the first chapter you stated that they are in they're 6th year. 3) The "coffee" scene (as I like to call it) was wonderfully used to develop the characters and yet was still very simple. Not a lot actually happened, but a lot was revealed. The way you are developing the relationship of Kurama and Hiei is very fitting. I'm anticipating future such scenes. It will be interesting to see how well Kurama's character adapts to playing the submissive role. And, on the note of Hiei and Kurama's relationship, I'm looking forward to the developing shonen-ai and the teachers' and students' (namely Hermione's) effects upon and reactions to it, especially with the demons' varying "human" tolerance levels. 4) Draco's demon description is quite believably tied into the HP history. For a moment, I was half expecting him to have an epiphany concerning K and H's natures. 5) I find Hermione highly annoying (enjoyably so), but her confusion and overly complex (as is human) "logic" is very intrinsic to the fic. It adds another layer that is imperative for morphing text into a true story.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared ^^ On: January 14, 2005 23:16 CST
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Just as a quick note before I forget, the english plural is "elves." If English isn't your first language (I'm entirely impressed) what is?
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: January 14, 2005 16:14 CST
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cool. MORE!!!! I love all these twists and when will Lupin teach again?
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Reviewed By: StormAz (not signed in) On: January 14, 2005 03:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hermione is getting ready to get herself into trouble again eh? And probably drag the boys with her ^_~ Personally, I liked the idea of Hiei giving Draco a "set down" ... he needs it! And poor Hagrid. He loses more of his pets to Voldemorts dramas. Um ... the kitsune is pointed at Hermione? Or just likes messing with her to see what she'll do? hehe ... that's ok, I'll wait and see. Enjoyed the chapter, thanks for updating ^__^
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:50 CST
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:50 CST
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Reviewed By: skyfire_katana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 16:28 CST
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Absolutely evil cliffhangers...
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Yay an update! I'd give a longer review but I really should be getting back to my homework. The spell is Lumos I believe.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 20:21 CST
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Go Kyuubi. I noticed your reference to him right off and was like, "O.O Kyuubi-sama!" Heh, Great chapter, though I wonder what Kurama would do if he saw that artist depiction of himself... ^.^
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hermione? wow. Update soon! And yet again, great chapter! ^^
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 20:06 CST
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Hm, you have a hidden history in almost all of your fics. I like it as long as the history is eventually revealed and doesn't forever remain a mystery to us readers.
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 20:00 CST
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hehe ... leave it to the kitsune to find a plant that could mess with the wizards ^_^ Very interesting chapter ... answered a few questions, brought up a few more. I'll wait and see what you come up with mext ^_____^
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