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Reviewed By: Shadowstar666 (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 22:17 CST
Comment/Review:
very cool fic... ummm where is the important message though?
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Reviewed By: kumezu On: January 09, 2005 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I like your fic very much, I'm very happy that you update. I read your chapter 8 and said that there is a very important A/N at the bottom but there is not. The chapter finish "....she could practically buy a new apartment with that much. Except that she had to pay" I think is mising something. I'm correct?
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you have an intresting thing here. gotta say its damned good. i cringed, however, at the thought of kagome with Naraku but its understandable. just make sure not to blur the line of stripper vs prostitute. in the US, its illegal (xept in nevada) to pay for sex (go fig) but yeah, i know...its japan. great story though, excellent character development. you pushed a lot of info about kohaku and sango in the first scene, but its still cool. (lots of sleepign after sex also, hmm...) good story keep it up.
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Reviewed By: ichie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story. i love it. update soon!!
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