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| "Halloween Party!" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: erika On: November 05, 2004 22:18 EST
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(crying) oh forget it, the guest list is closed anyway!!!!
| Reviewed By: erika On: November 05, 2004 22:15 EST
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wish i was part of the party and i was paired with Yami, i think i will wear : I will wear a purple dress that goes down till my knees, with two Spaghetti straps and glitter on it and with purple leather high heel shoes and I will also wear a necklace that shape like a heart that say I Love You in cursive and to purple earrings and my light purple hair will be in bun. and i have light purple eyes
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 00:50 EST
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you know what i figured out? if i dug that deep to be a bright blue aura, i probally kiled my self by taking so much energy,yup, that would have killed me for sure. keep on updating soon,cant wait for the epilouge. shane.
| Title: Halloween party invite
Reviewed By: R.G. WolfBlade On: November 04, 2004 17:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey D.J. I'm get into this I'm going fight Jason cool keep it comeing.
| Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 16:53 EST
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Awsome fic!! I can't wait for the epilogue!! Hope the epilogue is longer than long. It should be because sometimes in stories, the last chapter is long or sometimes it's a little long and sometimes short. So, hope you update the last chapter of the story. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Meira (aka paralleltodarkness) On: November 04, 2004 16:40 EST
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*standing there, eyes wide in shock* Whoa... that was an intense chapter... Anyways... Yay! I got to fight again! ^-^ Anyways... can't wait until the epilogue! My sister and I both read your fics, and we both say that it would be great if we could see your older fics. Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 16:00 EST
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YAY! More action! This is too exciting! You know me well, Daniel-chan! I DO NOT BACK DOWN FROM ANYONE! *LOL* Man I'm running out of words to say. But what I lack in words, I'll give in actions. ^_~
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 12:36 EST
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OMG!!!!! that was hell of a cool chapter!!! this is getting really good and now.....you make an evil cliffhanger.....i think the three fighters had won but,who knows. anyways....plz you have to make more!!! or at least another fic like this. and if u do, you can bet im gonna sign up for it as soon as it comes out,with all of my same bio that i gave u for this story. and 1 more thing, i have read and reviewed ur beaty pegent story with yugi as the judge, and i want you to make more, it is hilarious. cant wait for the epilouge and i hope it is really long. plz update soon. shane.
| Reviewed By: Stary Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 13:55 EST
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Hey! I wanna be in your next story! Keep in touch! E-mail: Kiffaniz@aol.com I.M.: Kiffaniz
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 21:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well,this demon sounds like a good fight,but, i am the MASTER in shadows,if i can gather enough energy within one minute,that monster is toast,all it takes is sixty seconds,i just need some distractions for that time,as soon as i know i gatherd up a hella lot of energy, a swirling giant ball of pitch dark energy capable of destroying anything ,everything and anyone will come raining down from the heavens,at a inhuman speed not even that demon can move away from,when it hits,he will be destroyed and never live against my attack, for it is "DOOMSDAY CRASH!!!" ARMAGEDDON HAS COME FOR THIS TITAN!, however,as soon as the monster is destroyed,i will go unconcious for a few hours to 2 days. please, i beg you,let me kill him with my ultimate move,like i said, it will deroy anything,everything and anyone caught in its radius,which,is the size of a planet. if i make the attack destroy the monster,then i will also have to make my attack also stop from destroying this planet. i will have to time it just right, or earth will be gone. i shall bring down this titan and save earth all at once,but if i use my powers to save earth from the impact to destroy the monster,i will be out for only kami would know. please use this idea so i can bring down that monster, i dont and i wont die just yet,especially with my demon abilities and friends helping me. YOUR TIME HAS COME MONSTER!!!! PREPARE TO MEET YOUR DOOM!!!!
| Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 21:14 EST
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YEAH! Now this is the action I was talking about! You never disappoint me, Daniel-chan! Great going on this chapter! You deserve a reward...Come and get it if you dare...*chuckle*
| Reviewed By: Meira (paralleltodarkness) On: November 01, 2004 20:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-~ I GOT TO JOIN IN THE FIGHT?! AWESOME!!! Anyways, this is really good - keep on writing! I can't wait to see the next chapter! .Meira.
| Reviewed By: Silver Moon Phoenix On: November 01, 2004 20:23 EST
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Luna: I resent my last thought. I'm totally scared! (Huddles with Luna) I'm scared, too. DJ, you have just brought out the movie horror monsters that I fear, and this is GREAT! Luna: You're delusional. I wonder who will survive the game 'til dawn. I wonder, too. Well, let's hope we find out soon.
| Reviewed By: Silver Moon Phoenix On: November 01, 2004 20:17 EST
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Oh, I wonder who else will appear... (Gives mischevious look) Luna: Hikari, you're scaring me... I am. Good. Luna: (Sighs) I think sometimes she forgets I'm the yami and she's the hikari. Well, let's go to the next chapter. I'm eager to find out what will happen!
| Reviewed By: Silver Moon Phoenix On: November 01, 2004 20:11 EST
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Luna: Hikari, what is this basketball? (Sighs) You have a lot to learn, Luna. Luna: Hey, I may be an ancient sorceress, but I still have tricks up my sleeve. Really. Great chapter. Time for the next one!
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