Title: EvilPart1
Reviewed By: Shiroikage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
name: Hiryuu Kagegami age: 18 height: 180cm looks: Long black hair with red highlights, gold-yellow eyes, light tanned, a black snake with feather wings tattoo on his right forearm. outfits: A plain red sweater, a pair of blue jeans, a pair of running shoes evil outfit: A red sleeveless turtleneck skin tight shirt, a pair of black leather pants, a pair of fingerless black gloves, a pair of black leather boots. personality: Very cold hearted to others but caring to animals without people knowing that, quiet, cool headed, loves making robotic animals or dolls in his free time, a skills swordsman, hates nosiy and stupid people and very, very stubborn. who you\\\\\\\'d like to fall in love with: None powers: Lighting which also gives him speed and shadows for teleporting wepons: A katana and a metal sharp claw for the left hand. specialty: Hiding in shadows, using electricity to controls robot animals or dolls that he create or anything he find. why your evil: Abandon by his clan for a crime he didn\\\\\\\'t commit. Hiryuu manages to get away from the slaughter but was badly injured. With no choice but to hide in one of the underground shrine. Inside he found a seal gate and he heard a voice from it. Saiding that unseal it and he shall have power to destory his enemies but with a price. Hiryuu being lost in his anger and revenge, he unseal it and lost his left hand when the creature bite it off and grant him the power of shadows and lighting.
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