| "DarkWorld" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 23:49 CDT
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It's been three years, so this is probably dead, but that's a shame. The little touches like the nonverbal communication between Inuyasha and Kagome and the big touches like your compelling OCs and plot make this a stellar story.
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 22:43 CDT
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Okay. I've just finished Chapter 3, and this story is awesome. The characterization is sublime. I couldn't even wait to finish what you have posted before telling you that. It's the best of what I've read so far from you.
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Title: Damaged Tears
Reviewed By: DamagedTears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah man i was really getting into the story *sniff*
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love the story and i hope you hope date again in the near future ^^ keep it up k?
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 15:14 CDT
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OMG! This story is awesome! I also read Transformations at fanfiction(dot)net and that story was really good but I couldn't keep track of all the kids but I got through it anyways! I love this story! It's really good and you have to update soon! Please! I went to deviantart(dot)com and I saw the picture heirlooms! I haven't looked at all your pictures yet though! I'm going to check them out but this story is awesome and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Zacho On: August 22, 2005 14:20 CDT
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YAY! UPDATE! i like this story. very cool. well that's all i gotta say. Well, lookin forward to many more, Zacho
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Reviewed By: Zach On: July 05, 2005 16:06 CDT
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Awwwww..... too bad, i feel sorry for you, but none the less, i can't wait till the next chapters. L8er!!!
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Reviewed By: Oni_kasai On: June 12, 2005 11:20 CDT
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well, i love your story, including transformations, but i've been waiting for an update, i know you prob. don't have time right now, but ur leaving me hanging! anyway, hope to read again, l8er
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Reviewed By: Kakan On: February 09, 2005 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what a great fic, I can't wait for the next chapter =^.^= by the way this chapter was a bit messed up, no spaces between paragraphs so it was a bit hard to read
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 15:03 CST
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ohhhh, this is going to get confusing fast, but i will try to keep up :) so far so good. me want more... that sounds selfish, me would like more... please? ahh whatever. Zirra oh Kimi looks so cool in demon form.
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 17:24 CST
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Excellent chapter once again. The part with Inuyasha's instincts was amusing, at least to me. I wonder if it will become a point of contention in future... I look forwards to seeing what you have in store for the four...*cough* three of them. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza PS. Mery christmas and a happy new year!
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Title: Hurrah!
Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 17:13 CST
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God I hate IE at times...finally managed to sort it although this means I have to be logged in... Pardon the name, I created the account a long time ago so it's incorrect. Loved the chapter, as before. Look forwards when we catch back up to where it was. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Esme On: December 07, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice so far, update when you can!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww poor inu
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Reviewed By: Kelly Bean On: November 12, 2004 18:01 CST
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I REALLY like this fic so far. The playful banter between Inu & Kag is priceless and when he licked her neck...I think I blushed too! I am a little frustrated though because mm.org is showing that you just updated a couple of chapters on Nov 8th, but it won't let me access them...I can't get past chapter 2 and I really want to read about them purifying the jewel. I guess I'll just have to keep an eye out on your fic and try to read more of it later. Perhaps it's just one of those funky computer gliches...we'll see
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 08, 2004 17:00 CST
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*Bows repeatly while apologising* Sorry, I really shopud have reviewed them all individually, I didn't realise that you posted so many together. So not only did the borthers find a sister they got carried into another world and met an alternate version of both themselves and their father. Truely excellent. I look forwards to seeing what new twists you have plannned for us. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 08, 2004 15:50 CST
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I think somewhere along the way I must have missed an update...excellent chapter, love the simple observations Kagome continues to make about Inuyasha and the lively internal dialog that narrates the events. Just going to switch to chapter 3 now and have a read. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 18:33 CDT
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i like it. awww. he licked her! lol. cant wait till the next update
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Reviewed By: ScaryClownHat On: October 28, 2004 17:26 CDT
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A very good start, cant wait for the rest.
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Title: Tekablade
Reviewed By: Tekablade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far. Can't wait for the next chapters. I will review them ALL. Blade
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 26, 2004 16:21 CDT
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Fantastic chapter. I have to admit my initial conception of this from the prologue might well have been wrong but still I'll wait a bit longer before I make a judgement as to where I think you are going...sorry, habit of mine to try and work out the plot ahead of time. Seriously though that was an excellent chapter, the simple interactions between them were both subtle and powerful, definately told a lot about their relationship and the complexities within. I look forwards to reading more. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 26, 2004 16:05 CDT
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Interesting prologue, looks good so far. If you don't mind me saying this does on some levels remind me of LoZ:A Link to the Past...sorry, just me being strange again. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 26, 2004 09:40 CDT
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I am going to be blunt. This is a work of fanfiction. Readers are only going to be here if they are already familiar with the characters and plot. Therefore, massive amounts of exposition will serve only to bore people to death. The prolouge is supposed to serve as a 'hook', something to intrigue the reader and make tham want more. I skipped most of yours, because I already know that Kirara is a two tailed demon cat, Sango is a stayer, and etc. It was boring, and it didn't make me want to click the next chapter button to see what happens next. Put that stuff in authors notes or something. You need to introdue people to what make your fic unique right off the bat, or they're not going to read further.
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Title: ^__________________^
Reviewed By: marta178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI there!! This new story seams to be good thought i've only read the prologue :P A world where Naraku rules....ummm....promissing =)...i know...it's only the prologue...but i became a litle confused...they killed Naraku in the light world right? so did he manage to ressurect somehow? I hope you can aswer my questions in your next chapter ^^ ps.:only a little correction if I'm allowed..."...of whom Inuyasha killed when one brother sought to use her..." you must put Kagome insted of her, 'cause you didn't mensioned Kagome before in that paragrath. pps.:I do not speak english as a first language, and i really don't use it outside the web space so you must forgive my grammar and spelling mistakes, ok? Thanks for your time listening to my bablings ^^ **peace**
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