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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 02:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is killing me, you know. "I remembered." ?!?!?!? grrrrr. I must find out more...must read next chapter!!! and then, even though i have absolutly NO RIGHT (I am apologizing ahead of time, and i will apologize again next review) i will be like all those reviewers are to me. I shall do something i try to not do very often. you will know what it is, because i will be yelling apologies after i do it. That is how you will know.
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*screams* I DID IT AGAIN!!!!! I WENT TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! BUT I DIDN' T READ A WORD I SWEAR I DIDN'T I AM SO SORRY PLEASE FORGIVE ME PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL TRY TO NOT LET IT HAPPEN AGAIN!!!!! ONLY JUST FORGIVE ME PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! ...i dont get it. I NEVER act like this. What the fuck is wrong with me, eh? Its your fic, i swear it. I just read about the butterflies!!! *tears well up* its so sad...i guess your story is just so god damned happy by contrast that i can't help but act like this. hmm...it will be tomorrow in nine minutes. eight, now. isnt that amazing? i should be asleep. I am sick. I should be resting. But instead i am glued to your fic, obsessed with making sure i review every single chapter. and when i am done with this fic, what will I do? I'll tell you. I'll be reading your other fic. but i will probably have to read it again, because by then my vision will be verry blurry indeed............
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
stoopid cliffy. ah well. I noticed i've been asking many pardons latley. None this chapter!! Only four left, and then i shall be waiting for the next chapter. *smiles* oh, and you might want to check out this site: http://www.linsdomain.com/Otherworld.htm
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrrrrr......YOU HAD BETTER MAKE SESSHOMARU-SAMA NICE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!! Oh!!! Gomen, gomen!! I should not try to boss you, i am so sorry!!!! Please forgive this one!!! Please???
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! I DID IT AGAIN!!!! I'm sorry!!!!! I really am. I am trying so hard to do this right!!! I have never done this before, most of the time i just read the whole fic and then review, i am trying!!! please forgive me!!! please?? i can't give you puppy eyes because Fenris Fenrir is a wolf god. I have pointy ears and a tail, just like Koga and Ayame. Actually, I dont have a tail. I have a tale, but no tail. I do have pointy ears though!!!
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha! This time, i did not forget. heehee, i can't believe it. Chibi??? Hahahaha!!! Oh well. i like the time-honored line, too. "May i touch your ears?" *giggles, then regains composure* Gomen!! I dont like ppl to see me giggle too often. I am not usually so happy. See what effect your fics have on me?? Now all my friends will be afeared to come near me, and it's all your fault.
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I CLICKED ON THE LINK TO THE NEXT CHAPTER WITHOUT WRITING A REVIEW BUT I DIDNT READ ANYTHING I SWEAR I DIDNT!!!!!!! Please dont be mad!!! Please?? AWW, you're so cool. ^_^
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:10 CST
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Ach, so good. I wish i could right like you. I have more chapters on my fics...except the one for my cousin...but i like yours better. Ah, human nature. "I am my own worst enemy." NEXT CHAPTER!!!
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm...lotsa japanese in this chapter, would you mind helping me with the vocabulary? I'm learning oh so slowly... ARIGATOU!!!
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have decided i will review every chapter as i read it, so here is the first reveiw. That guy up there, Andoryuu196, he's a fan of mine...and a close friend. So anyway, I'm liking so far...*smiles faintly* I love it when Sesshomaru dosent insist that Inuyasha is worthless. And not because I like Inuyasha. He's the worst main character in the story...except, maybe, Jaken. I just like it when Sesshomaru-sama shows his soft side. Heehee.
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Reviewed By: Andoryuu 196 On: December 03, 2004 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
two words: YOU'RE AMAZING
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Reviewed By: Morna Sidonie On: November 15, 2004 02:38 CST
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yeah! An update! thank you!
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Reviewed By: swasdiva On: November 10, 2004 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a great fic! You are very adept at reorchestrating the original events of the series, so adept that the "new" events seem like a natural progression of what should have happened. And what's this? Now Kikyou has to be compared to Kagome?!? Is there no justice for that poor soul?? ^_^ I think it's a fitting an creative twist...maybe this time Kikyou will slowly learn to love Inuyasha for what he is, and not what he fantasizes he will be. I'd like to see a Inu/kikyou after reading what you've done so far, but I'd also love to see Kags enter in somewhere. Who knows? It's all in your very creative hands! Please keep up the good work!!
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Title: am I the only one who reviews?
Reviewed By: Morna Sidonie On: October 30, 2004 07:48 CDT
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Thank You I enjoyed the update I liked the kaede part, she is so very cute! I hope I'm not bothering you by reviewing twice If so,sorry. If not, you're welcome.
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Reviewed By: Morna Sidonie On: October 27, 2004 13:26 CDT
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I like this story alot. please update quickly,I can't wait for more!
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