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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 21:57 CST
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MUAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!! I like the scene where Kouga gets beat up. I dont really like people portraying him like that but he seams like a cool bad-guy here. I like how Nuraku just comes in here, it gives the story even more suspence. Keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 19:44 CST
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I like your story. Please update soon. Thanks!
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Title: no more sniffles
Reviewed By: rin-sama1989 On: December 09, 2004 00:30 CST
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That was a great chapter! i personaly dont hate hojo but i dont like em either. i think he should just hook up with one of kagome-chan's friends and leave her the fu** alone. ! AHHH *runs away from an angry sammy* You shouldnt talk like that rin! Howed you get here?! anyway, i'm all better now thanks to my freind sammy and so i am in a wonderful mood...my shows on. gotta go! bye!
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Reviewed By: rin-sama1989 On: November 25, 2004 09:57 CST
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I curantly have no words to express my opinion of this chapter...but it is good! I just wish I wasnt sick right now *sniff* Anybody got a tissue? rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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Title: hi bye anama
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 09:19 CST
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hi people i dont know who im writeing to but my sisiter rin_sama anywaz got to go in othe rwize g2g g2g g2g
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 21:56 CST
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Yay! *jumps up and down repededly* this story is sooo cool! I cant wait until the next chapter! Yes, I feel ditzy...its because my cuz just returned a hug I sent her...so yeah. Imagin me hear with a wry grin. I'm going to go before I go all out weird. You dont wanna see me on a sugar high. Please update soon you story is so well done. rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 00:46 CST
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This is really begining to build, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 08:26 CST
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HA! This is totaly awsome! I hope to continue reading this. I like your style of writing it's very descriptive and understandable there are not many stories like that, most have too much or too little. I'm tired right now so I'm not doing my usual reviews were I'm acting a little insane*yawn* See Ya. Update soon! rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 22:54 CST
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You have a pretty good beginning. I would like to read more, I hope you get a chance to update soon.
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Title: AN UPDATE LIKE YIPEE!
Reviewed By: Y Do U Care? On: November 08, 2004 21:35 CST
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YIPEE YOU UPDATED! .....even though i already knew this was going to happen.....or did i?....excuse me i'm having a memory failure moment. i've been so busy with school i don't remember what's going on in any of the fics i used to love to read, like this one for example.....sigh when will i be free from the evil clutches of shcool? Anyways hope you update soon and catch up on where you left.
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Reviewed By: Patchcat (not signed in) On: November 07, 2004 09:22 CST
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I remember this story on FFN. It was a very enjoyable read then, even if it isn't finished yet. I like the changes you made. Having the story from a consistent POV makes it a lot easier to read and I'm glad to see that RL has given you the time to make those changes. I will definately be keeping up with this one. See ya next update ! Patch
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Reviewed By: Like Um Oops! How stupid of me! On: October 29, 2004 20:36 CDT
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Laughs stupidly......now I remember.....your story was on ff.net! My apologies for accusing you as a plagiarizer.......again sorry. -_- I have a really bad memory. Hehehe anyways I think I should stop writing before I make another stupid comment. CIAO!
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Reviewed By: Y Do U Care? On: October 29, 2004 20:33 CDT
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YOU PLAGIARIZER! You copied this story from someone. I can't remember who, but I know you did.
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Reviewed By: Y Do U Care! On: October 29, 2004 20:28 CDT
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YOU PLAGIARIZER! You copied this story from someone. I can't remember who, but I know you did.
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a totally awesomely, terrific start and I love it! Not many have gotten me hook on the first chapter, usually its the second or third, but I gotta say wonderfuly job. A beautiful story you've got going on here! I can't wait to see how the story will progress... good luck with it ~Zonza
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