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| "Freeport" Reviews/Comments [ 194 ] | | Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] | Reviewed By: Hatsbox On: January 16, 2005 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just... brilliant. The attention to detail, the swirling plot that isn't entirely focused on sex, hell, the fact that you even have a plot is well worth praise. Please continue. I want to sob with happiness over your use of grammar. Freeport itself is just so well thought out, I can't say enough about this story. Every chapter is well worth the wait. ~Hb
| Reviewed By: mel^_^ On: January 16, 2005 11:29 CST
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At last I can review again! And now that I can, I don't know what to say. ....well, this chapter was fabulous. It took me the whole afternoon to read, because I read a couple of pages of it whenever I'd finished some part of my studies as a kind of reward. I must admit, I like Mako, too, it's the 'possibly a very bad guy but damn hot' attraction. Though I don't like him anywhere near as much as your Duo and Wufei. And I feel bad for Heero even though he isn't even in the fic... Wufei thinking about him kinda made me want to read The Arrangement again. I'm hoping for some nice UST in the next chapters, thanks for writing!!
| Reviewed By: Rubbing hands in delight On: January 15, 2005 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Excellent build up, and nice way you're keeping me off balance, not sure who is really interested in whom or where this might go. I like Mako, too. Yum! W's got good taste in men, all around. *g* Loved Wufei's moment of revelation!
| Title: Freeport
Reviewed By: Kagero13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoohoo! MediaMiner is letting me review, better get this in while I can. As you know, I love your fic. Well, all your fics, but since this is a review for Freeport, let me just say I can't wait to see how this particular pairing develops within this fascinating plot. And as much as I am eternally grateful you are a wonderfully consistent updater, that last cliffhanger is particularly evil. My poor Wufei. Kick their ass Wufei! We're rooting for you! Thanks again for your work! Kagero13
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 15:41 CST
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I think I've said this before, but I love Wufei's snarky humour, it's absolutely adorable! And I love Wufei's cut off sentences when he *just* doesn't know what to say. Too good!!! --0--Wufei hesitated, and then followed in a bit of a huff, though he preferred to think of it as justified ire.--0-- Yep! Keep deluding yourself Wu-babe. I love the way you use your language, you make every single sentence stand out and grab the reader's attention. You really are brilliant in this aspect. --0--Wufei swallowed his own smirk. Justice was sweet.--0-- Wow! Wufei really achieved something there didn't he? Somehow he managed to make Duo shut up for all of five seconds!!! I know, I'm exaggerating, Duo can be quiet when he wants to, but it's funny how Wufei revelled in managing to shock Duo for five seconds like that. I love it when Wufei thinks about justice, it's rather amusing. --0--It fell in thick spiky locks sweeping away from his face, gelled stiff, or else he had a quite unusual follicle pattern (when you knew that Trowa's hair fell that way naturally, you no longer judged these things without information).--0-- That's cute! You're right, that's a totally cliffhanger and I can't wait until next week! Cheers.
| Reviewed By: Niu Shiy-Ue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 09:57 CST
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An interesting system, it reminds me of Heilein's "The Moon is a Harsh Mistress". But I don't think it would work anywhere else, anarchy only seems to work if a serious mistake would kill everyone. Otherwise, circumstances tend to be too lenient or easily escapable. That being said, I really enjoy your story. I can't wait for you to continue it.
| Reviewed By: Niu Shiy-Ue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 09:56 CST
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An interesting system, it reminds me of Heilein's "The Moon is a Harsh Mistress". But I don't think it would work anywhere else, anarchy only seems to work if a serious mistake would kill everyone. Otherwise, circumstances tend to be too lenient or easily escapable. That being said, I really enjoy your story. I can't wait for you to continue it.
| Reviewed By: Niu Shiy-Ue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 09:55 CST
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An interesting system, it reminds me of Heilein's "The Moon is a Harsh Mistress". But I don't think it would work anywhere else, anarchy only seems to work if a serious mistake would kill everyone. Otherwise, circumstances tend to be too lenient or easily escapable. That being said, I really enjoy your story. I can't wait for you to continue it.
| Reviewed By: Niu Shiy-Ue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 09:55 CST
Comment/Review:
An interesting system, it reminds me of Heilein's "The Moon is a Harsh Mistress". But I don't think it would work anywhere else, anarchy only seems to work if a serious mistake would kill everyone. Otherwise, circumstances tend to be too lenient or easily escapable. That being said, I really enjoy your story. I can't wait for you to continue it.
| Title: Ch. 10
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 07:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoying this story greatly. Fantastic detail and well realized world. One question though: why the NC-17 rating? It's PG-13 so far. :-(
| Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 02:33 CST
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Bah. Very naughty of you to end it there. ^_^ I loved the bar... 'twas very gritty and real. "Thinking. I can feel you do it in the dark with my eyes closed. It's annoying." *smirk*
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 18:25 CST
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Yay! I'm in! ---0--- That fight scene was the best, really the best. I was amazed at how well you wrote it. Normally I gloss over fight scenes because they bore me but I read yours real carefully because it was that intense and that spectacular. ---0--- Yep, totally seems like something Heero would do, knocking some sense into Wufei literally. Tee, hee, hee. ---0--- I liked it how Wufei and Duo spent some time talking, it didn't slow the story down at all but at the same time showed how Wufei and Duo could share something special. ---0--- I can tell by Duo's reaction that he liked Wufei's laugh. I liked how you wrote that part, it was really special. ---0--- This fic is coming along real nicely. Thanks also for not making us wait too long for this chapter.
| Title: Ch 9
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 17:00 CST
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If anybody showed up with a popcorn and hotdog stand, Wufei had the feeling he was going to go ballistic, Preventer ethics be damned. LOL Thanks for the holiday treat! Have fun with the relatives. ...But you say it's gonna be another twelve chapters for Duo and Fei to get with the nookie? *whimper* Okay. I can be patient. Although, the wait won't be so bad 'cause I assume there's going to be a gradual build-up of sexual tension that starts way earlier. (Actually, it's already started, ne? And in this chapter, Wufei laughing.... ^_^) I liked the bits about the PC-spacer terminology and the genemod babies. You've done a wonderful job of making the world breathe with life.
| Reviewed By: SilentWillow920 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...I'm still reading! :D
| Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 13:25 CST
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OH this was lovely how Wufei tried to put Freeport into a system he could make sense of. First anarchism, then chaosim, barbarism, sozialism, comunisim, he,hehehe, he kind of ran out of options then, right? mmuuhaha, why not call it Freeportism? It seems to work, after all. Though leaving me with this cliffhanger isn't nice.
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