| "Coercing Kakarot" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bulma16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't let all those numbers go to your head Geeb, heh...Seriously though, I *LOVE* this fic. I love Bulma's assertiveness...Kakarot's innocence and Vegeta's self-assured attitude. I wasn't sure if I would like this fic but not because of the yaoiness. I wasn't sure how a die-hard yaoi fan was going to pull off a het sex lemon but you did really well!! *finishes off her ice tea* Heh, got a lil hot in here. I read this fic on another site a while back and I forgot to email you about it. What I'm trying to say in my dizzy blonde way is fantastic job Geeb *grins* Hmmm...how much sporking is it going to take to get you writing another het lemon? Preferably starring yours truly and my T-bone? *grins* Just kidding...sorta. ~Claire
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 02:19 CST
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I can't believe I forgot to review this! *blushes* Well, this is the story that got me hooked on yaoi. =P Darn you and your awesome writing and fantabulous plots! =D I loved the game of seduction that was being played on Goku...it put a whole new spin on Vegita and Goku for me. Thanx for letting me see the lime-light. *snickers*
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very rare for me to give out all tens, but you've earned every one of them. This is likely the best V/G/B I've ever read. You write lemon wonderfully (far better than I could ever hope to). No detail overkill, yet I generally knew who and what was where at any given moment. I enjoyed how you utilized the general assumptions hinted at, however unintentionally, in the anime (the mutual attractions between all three characters). The fact that you managed to squeeze a feasible plot into this lovely romp AND keep all of them in character makes this a priceless piece. Welcome to my favorites list, GB.
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Title: Coercing Kakarot
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey can you continue this or is it only a one-shot like you said.it would be nice to read how vegeta explains everything and read has to how goku will get them back..just a thought...
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Reviewed By: StarHoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All Ican think to say is WOW. That was one of the best fics I've ever read. Kudos to you.
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, lovely fic! The world needs more B/V/G three-ways; I've only seen a few in my time. I can see a three-way relationship between them. After all, Vegeta dedicated his self -destruction in the Buu saga to Bulma *and* Kakarot. I can't believe you wrote this in two days, argh! I so wish I could do that, cause I have so many stories I want to write. I loved Vegeta's splutterings when Bulma first brought up the subject. Bulma played a bit of a dirty trick on Goku, but it was funny and worked out nevertheless. *Gorgeous* lemon and descriptions, and you handled the threesome well. I was afraid Vegeta would be trying to show off to Bulma, but he was very considerate to Goku, so that was satisfying to read. Great ending, too. Loverly!
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Reviewed By: richonyx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 10:57 CST
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OMG. I mean...OMG. That was great! So great! Absolutely loved it!
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: aoshi4misao [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give you so much more than a 10 if i could on the enjoyment factor. I love to read good 3-ways and I can find very very few sadly. This was great! You should really consider writing more that are this style. I would read them all. Great job.
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 19:32 CST
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I read this first at work - which I shouldn't have done, because it distracted me for awhile. I like Bulma and Vegeta like this - I can just see them as an extremely sexual couple. (I am impressed by your vocabulary, by the way - censure, insidious, and obtuse aren't normally found in fanfiction.) Loved Bulma's line about Goku's clothes getting torn up. I think you and debbiechan write the only het stories I will read. Very hot. Probably the only complaint I have is Goku's initial reaction. Shouldn't he have been more worried/panic-stricken when Vegeta showed up? His reaction between being discovered and Vegeta wanting him to choose was a bit off. After that, he was back in character. Goku not being able to choose is just right. And Vegeta taking Goku was great. I'm hoping for a sequel, starting with Goku's reaction, maybe from the beginning of the scene with Bulma. I'd like to think he wasn't as oblivious as Bulma and Vegeta thought. And hopefully more Vegeta/Goku action.
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Reviewed By: star one On: November 01, 2004 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I to say is great fic!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: stovegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic!!! I rarely find one that involves v/g/b!!!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 16:04 CST
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Man, I'm starting to dislike Bulma... First she gets that little hottie Vegeta, now she gets the perfection that is Goku... :( Ahhhhh, I liked this, I liked this a lot. I just about melted at the touchingly comedic reaction of Vegeta when he realised Bulma was rather keen on Goku... "His woman...had...had thoughts...about Kakarot!" I think that was my fave line in the whole fic... :D Very well done fic - I hope to see more from you ... *Grin*
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Reviewed By: Kitkat not logged On: October 31, 2004 15:50 CST
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wow... i wish i could see this... you know, in a doujin or something... because Goku sure is hot. Incredible work. I already read other three V/G/B and this one is as good as the others, this trio never cease to amaze/amuse (whatever is the right word) me. I told you before and i'll say it again: You rock!
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: October 31, 2004 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was one of the best pieces I've had the pleasure of reading ! Great job, I hope to see more.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goody, I'm the first reviewer. I can't thank you enough, Gutterball, for this brilliant piece of smut. You are a remarkable talent. I also want to thank LisaB for daring you to write this because I was too timid to actually press you--and WOMAN, you take a little shove better than a Saiyan. Magnificent work. Best V/G/B ever. A little story, humor and actual characterization--and best of all, plain ole good writing. Did I leave something out? Oh yeah, lovely lemons! The world of fanfiction welcomes you with a big SMOOCH. Both the DBZ yaoi world and the DBZ het fangurl world toast you for this piece! *tosses glitter confetti* BRAVA, BRAVA!!!!!
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