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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Dumas1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 23:43 CST
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Nice charming piece of WAFFy fluff. It's a good solid piece, can't really find any flaws in it. The only things I see that might be changed are just a few words here and there that don't quite fit. One example is '...and so very naïve to the effect she had on him.' Oblivious fits there a bit better in my opinion. Other than a couple spots like that, this is a very solid piece of writing.
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nli) On: March 05, 2005 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh.. i feel... so simple and clean. pure, like the rain from your story washed away all my troubles. ^_^ that was sweet.. i feel happy now. thank you.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 12:58 CST
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I can't believe that I hadn't read this yet - I love Miroku and Sango - mystic and warrior - both strong, but tender and in need of love in their lives. Lovely, truly lovely.
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Reviewed By: leanne0716 On: February 22, 2005 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. It displayed a certain image of love that could not be confessed and pain that could not be healed until that love was confessed. You truely are a great writer and I hope someday I could write as well as you can. I doubt that day would come but as I said I hope...
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Hatsumomo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! An M/S fic! I've been dying for one of these. After seeing all that you can do with the Inu/Kags fics, I was doing all I could to mentally encourage an MS pairing. They are my favourite couple, and I just want to say that I love you for writing this fic. It was excellent, as are all of your other writings, and I adore you as a writer. You should definitely write professionally, if you don't already. I would buy everything that you churned out.
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Title: Well Done
Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very heart touching piece. I am not as familiar with the characters as I would like, but you have made the fears of Miroku and Sango palpable and real to a person who doesn't watch/read Inu Yasha. I especially liked the description of the rain washing away all reservations, guilt and regrets as a prelude to the first hesitant kiss. I could almost taste their tears it was so well written. Brava!
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Reviewed By: Broken Visage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 18:27 CST
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I've seen your fics in the Featured section of the forum many times and had always been wondering about your work, but never got around to reading. That's why I decided to do that pic-a-fic. I have little to say other than "Wow." What I've heard is indeed well-deserved; you write on that level I aspire toward but have doubts about reaching. I must thank you, not only for you making such writing publicly viewable, but also for motivating me. While I had no intention to quit, reading what you're capable of has inspired me to push on harder. So, thank you. :)
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...angsty and sweet at the same time. Waff, waff, waff!! I hope they do get to be with each other at the end and try their best for those 20 children. LoL!! Wonderful.
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Reviewed By: Asa Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know how much I love you right....lol. Seriously i really worship you, i think your the only writer i've seen who can write the characters of inuyasha IN CHARACTER. Thats why i worship you so. Great Job.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (wont let me login) On: November 01, 2004 18:33 CST
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Perfect that's the only way to explain it sweet perfection. I love all M/S romance because, if it's done right, is so complicated and angsty. You captured the mood perfectally here and i hope you don't stop writing about those too like this!
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Reviewed By: Quiet Escapist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect. Everything leading up to the kiss, like their emotions and their actions, were all in character and beautifully written (much like all your other stories, lol). It's nice to see Miroku and Sango in the spotlight for once. I loved it, it was very touching. Great job!
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Reviewed By: MsCongeniality [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 08:33 CST
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A nice one-shot character study. I enjoyed it very much.
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Title: not signed in im lazy
Reviewed By: piscesanela On: October 31, 2004 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ... this could leave someone breathless ... it pulls at the heartstrings at first, then the kiss ... just wow... you captured these two perfectly in their thoughts and actions with such a tenderness they deserve in your writing style =)
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Reviewed By: SilverStarWing On: October 31, 2004 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooo cute Sueric! Something like that in an Ing/Kag stance would be awesome, too.
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Reviewed By: tessie On: October 30, 2004 23:01 CDT
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awww, so nice and sweet. i loved this. we got to see both sides of them and you captured them perfectly. but, then, you always do in your stories. I've never seen any of your stories with them being ooc. i really enjoyed this one shot. thank you for writing this! tessie
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Reviewed By: Rania On: October 30, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great!! A definite change from your Kagome/Inuyasha focused fics. I loved it!! I hope you get a chance to write more fics like this one!
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Title: well needed one shot
Reviewed By: Sari15- who can't log in On: October 30, 2004 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something all of us have been clamoring for in the Manga, the first real kiss of Miroku and Sango. Although engaged, they rarely show any intimacy towards each other, and you do a wonderful job of giving reasoning behind both of their minds about this. Beautifully written, and as sweet as their first kiss should be...something that isn't easy to do when Miroku's leacherness comes out too often around her. I thought this was the best one shot concerning Sango and Miroku I have ever read. It really touched me.
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