| "A cross between worlds" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
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Reviewed By: Axelalx On: December 01, 2004 21:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm not giving a rating just an opinion. and that is WHAT THE HELL
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Reviewed By: rose of vegeta On: November 19, 2004 13:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you need to be more descriptive with the fic. It just seems to simplistic (not anything bad especially if you're a beginner). But you could ellaborate more on people's feelings and what they are thinking and so on.
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