| "Morning" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: whieej
Reviewed By: forever broken [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 06:39 CST
Comment/Review:
whieej... love the story especialy the part that bakura is 'good'. It's pretty original 2! and I really enjoyd reading it! so I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Ryou cute!!! bye
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Reviewed By: Cairyn Sandstrom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 10:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it! Please update soon, I'm really curious!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this one. I can`t wait for more. I love how cute you make Ryou. I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Sailor InuYasha (not logged in..) On: November 26, 2004 22:47 CST
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Demmit.. I forgot that I can't use an arrow pointing to the left without being cut off.. Oh well, I'll finish now. May I suggest getting someone to read over your chapters before you post them? It might get rid of most of your spelling mistakes. ^ ^
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Reviewed By: Sailor InuYasha (not logged in) On: November 26, 2004 22:44 CST
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XD Yay! Three updates in one day! I love this fanfic.
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Reviewed By: Kat1132 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 19:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating. I really like where this is going. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
As a bit of advice, check over the chapter to look for spelling mistakes before posting it up. Anyway, the last chapter was pretty short but it was good. Mm, Ryou in a shower... *coughs* Update soon, k?
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Reviewed By: whee On: November 25, 2004 01:06 CST
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aawwww! Oh cute! Little ryou in blankets! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ShadowWolfGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 04:55 CST
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Sounds cute at the moment how Ryou's sucking on his finger, like a little chlid would suck their thumb ^0^
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 04:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good, keeps my attention. I hope you update soon, cause You're making me curious. Maybe try a bit more from Bakura's point of view as well
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 14:42 CST
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Hm, kinda interesting, I like it so far. And I remember seeing a picture of the Ring's pointer's digging into Ryou's skin, it was kinda weird but COOL. Update soon!
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