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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 15:27 CST Comment/Review: NIce! Got good aftermath with Katiana and the Pharaoh. It's kind of mysterious how the Pharaoh is acting... and I wonder if it's really written on the stones Katiana needs to translate. Very intruiging plot, and no plot holes!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 20:35 CST Comment/Review: Ohhh.. *eyes get sucked out of sockets and glued to computer moniter* (Okay, bad mental image) Really good chapter! It explained a lot, and kind of makes you think 'What's the Pharaoh really like?' You do such a good job of getting into Katiana's head (well duh, you created her), and explain her personality excellently! Hope the next chapters detail why the Pharaoh acts the way he does! Oh fudge sticks.. *tries to roast marshmellows, but the wood lacks fames* ^_^ Guess I'll haveta sitck to ol' cold marshmellows.. *grumbles and takes them off the sticks*
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 20:10 CST Comment/Review: *runs off with chapter* Awesome! I like the outting Yami went on with Katiana to Medara's. It was an interesting transition to get to find out about the rumors! ..Hmm. Wonder what Yami's hiding about 'harming' Katiana.. *ponders* Great! Now I'm off to read your next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 06:02 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter!! I thought of a few things that could happen but not that!! Continue writing please!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 15:13 CST Comment/Review: YaHHHOOO! Totally awesome! You're an extremely good writer, ya know? Well, duh, of course you knew. Anyways, I like the conflict between Seto and Yami over Katiana, that's pretty interesting. I hope your story doesn't end anytime soon! ^_^
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Title: GGRRREEEEEAAAATTTT! Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 15:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HEY; great chapter!! I really liked it and thought that is one of those storys with new ideas!! I wonder why not more review??? But keep up the good work and keep on trying you´re best!!!! á Dieau!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bloody kisses [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 19:10 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Your fanfic is awesome...sorry i have no suggestions(sp?) i like it the way it is.
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