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Reviewed By: witchhunterRnotlogin On: January 27, 2005 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! i loved it i hope yami will be okay!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 18:17 CST
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Very detailed and quick moving chapter! I can't believe those other Priestesses would do such a thing to Katiana over little rumors! If that girl can see into Katiana's memories or her mind, wouldn't she see she never tried to seduce Yami? Well, I thought it was so heartbreaking and sweet that Seto cried for her. It's like, this whole time he seems like some jerk who doesn't care about anyone but himself, but then you realize it's just because he cares so much for her. Please don't let her stay dead throught this!!!
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Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay that was a good chapter but her dying sucks!!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 14:40 CST
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Oohhhhh *insert x-files theme* The unkownnn... I wonder what he/she's up to. And what does he/she have against Yami? Oh yeah, it's great that Katiana and Yami finally admited or slightly implied their feelings to each other. Sweet!
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Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a great chapter
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 08:23 CST
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That was such an emotional chapter! I seriously loved the part with the stone and Katiana crying and the hugging. ^_^ I seriously believe Katiana and Yami are a sweet couple. Also, I'm going to start on your request soon!! Hopefully I get it done before Christmas or at least New Years!
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Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was really sweet i hope she picks yami!! ~Ayame~
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Reviewed By: witchhunterRnotloggedin On: December 04, 2004 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story i cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 15:27 CST
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NIce! Got good aftermath with Katiana and the Pharaoh. It's kind of mysterious how the Pharaoh is acting... and I wonder if it's really written on the stones Katiana needs to translate. Very intruiging plot, and no plot holes!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 20:35 CST
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Ohhh.. *eyes get sucked out of sockets and glued to computer moniter* (Okay, bad mental image) Really good chapter! It explained a lot, and kind of makes you think 'What's the Pharaoh really like?' You do such a good job of getting into Katiana's head (well duh, you created her), and explain her personality excellently! Hope the next chapters detail why the Pharaoh acts the way he does! Oh fudge sticks.. *tries to roast marshmellows, but the wood lacks fames* ^_^ Guess I'll haveta sitck to ol' cold marshmellows.. *grumbles and takes them off the sticks*
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 20:10 CST
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*runs off with chapter* Awesome! I like the outting Yami went on with Katiana to Medara's. It was an interesting transition to get to find out about the rumors! ..Hmm. Wonder what Yami's hiding about 'harming' Katiana.. *ponders* Great! Now I'm off to read your next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 06:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I thought of a few things that could happen but not that!! Continue writing please!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 15:13 CST
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YaHHHOOO! Totally awesome! You're an extremely good writer, ya know? Well, duh, of course you knew. Anyways, I like the conflict between Seto and Yami over Katiana, that's pretty interesting. I hope your story doesn't end anytime soon! ^_^
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Title: GGRRREEEEEAAAATTTT!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY; great chapter!! I really liked it and thought that is one of those storys with new ideas!! I wonder why not more review??? But keep up the good work and keep on trying you´re best!!!! á Dieau!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bloody kisses [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic is awesome...sorry i have no suggestions(sp?) i like it the way it is.
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