| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 17:27 PST
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I am curious about Kikyou. Earlier someone commented that it was the Adult Swim people who hated her - is she portrayed much differently in the manga? I must admit that her actions on the series (as played in the US) don't endear me to her but I don't think her evil - just bitter and sad. As someone else previously said, I am rather ambivalent to her. I take her as the author plays her. I was just curious as to what view others got that made them inclined to defend her.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: November 30, 2004 17:20 PST
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Well that had to be hard -er- no pun intended -LOL!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow~Magician [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 16:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely story! In the beginning, I actually was getting sort of wary of it, Kagome being a surrgate mother and all, (I don't think it's a bad thing at all, it's just... very different) but knowing how great your writing is, I stuck with it. I've accepted the story greatly, and now I find it really intriguing! Any of your OC you've made so far are really great, which can be a hard thing to do in fanfics. I also love the fact that comment make no difference to the story. We need more authors who don't base their story on how popular it is. I'm glad I've finally found a writer who is FOR that: writing
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Reviewed By: Prsnr24601-FFICsimon On: November 30, 2004 16:33 PST
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I think your angst fever is contagious. I got so many horrible (as in good) ideas for angst that even I felt guilty. I will even share on idea with you: Kagome gives birth to a healthy baby but complications arise and she either can no longer bear children or dies. That is the most cliche of the ideas. But unlike you, I don't have a brillant endless supply (or Susan Lucci hog-tied in my closet). And as to the ,last chapter, what is there too be said? (This is directed as an offhand comment to your characters) It's all out in the open, just deal with it and try not to completely ruin each others lives. Have you decided if Kagome be giving birth before or after the major conflict? Continue on una Maestra de Sue-sama!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 16:10 PST
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I'm so glad that all that 'powder-sleeve-dream' stuff has been clarified. And I'm glad that InuYasha finally confessed to Kagome about the 'dreams', although I don't think she quite knows the intensity of them going by her mild reaction. Did she really understand what he said? Was he clear enough? ----Wow! You killed Kikyou. I kinda knew that one or the other was going to be targeted, but so soon? And InuYasha's confusion because of the illusory Kagome...nice twist. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 15:41 PST
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that was great
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (not signed in) On: November 30, 2004 14:47 PST
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Hmmm...oh my. Before i go any furthur I must address Kikyo and bleeding. When she was brought back the blood was symbolic, a metaphysical thing. Of course, it was only in the anime and i usually go more by the manga. In which case since she became undead-girl I don't beleive I've ever seen her bleed. But anyway, enough of my nit-picking. Butterfly youkai, eh? No, I don't think it's that simple. She's a bit too manovolant and powerful for that. especialy since most IY insectoid youkai are pretty much minor demons. damn though, what the hell does she want??? That encounter when she masqueraded as Kagome was like one of Naraku's tricks on steroids!
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: November 30, 2004 05:48 PST
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Oh wow...didn't expect Kikyo's demise right there. Pretty good twist about using Kagome's image. I bet Inu Yahsa can't be to happy about that one at all....Anyways, very good story so far. So much drama...Definately thriving on it!!
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Title: long time reader, first time reviewer
Reviewed By: asiancherries [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 22:18 PST
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i've read all your stories thus far. this one is my favorite. it is just so different from the other stories. it's a bit more angsty, a bit more romantic, and a whole lot more original. it is different from anything i have ever read. at first, i wasn't sure how i felt about the plot. it was controversial, i admit. but the writing was solid, and fluid, so i continued. i'm glad i did. i think out of all your fan fics, this one has captured Inuyasha's character from the manga/anime perfectly. it is a purely original fic if there ever was one. even if i don't review with any frequency, know that i'm always reading along. keep it going--good writing is hard to find in a world of pre-pubescent hormonal brats. though let us not forget, we were once in the same boat. some day, they will grow up like we did, and when that happens, it will be legal for us to beat them up.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 20:25 PST
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well that was great.. till tomorrow..
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 29, 2004 19:42 PST
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Of course the powder is on his sleeve! I knew it all along! LOL. Ok, so maybe I didn't think that it could still be on the sleeve. But now it's like so obvious that that's the reason for all those dreams. Was he actually gonna start crying at the end there? Poor Inu. *pats Inu's head* I'd say a good ear-rubbing would do some good right about now, right, Kagome? LOL
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 19:38 PST
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Holy cow, What a ride! At least he didn't actually do anything - some part of his brain or Kikyou's warnings got though to him... serious angst- but then again - you warned us with your story type. Okay - so he has the powder on his sleeve... isn't fire-rat suppose to clean and repair itself?? How do they protect themselves from a being that can look & smell like any other person? or maybe just the object of that persons affections - I wonder if he came clean with his feelings if the power of the powder would cease?? - You certainly keep me thinking.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 19:38 PST
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Holy cow, What a ride! At least he didn't actually do anything - some part of his brain or Kikyou's warnings got though to him... serious angst- but then again - you warned us with your story type. Okay - so he has the powder on his sleeve... isn't fire-rat suppose to clean and repair itself?? How do they protect themselves from a being that can look & smell like any other person? or maybe just the object of that persons affections - I wonder if he came clean with his feelings if the power of the powder would cease?? - You certainly keep me thinking.
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Reviewed By: Morly On: November 29, 2004 19:17 PST
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I know that stuff got into Inu's nose because he sneezed and not only that but he wiped his face on the sleeve of his haori,
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Title: I LOVE YOU!!!!
Reviewed By: Crissy69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 18:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fic I have read EVER, and I love the fic and you for writing it. Thank you for not making Kikyou an obsessive bitch and thank you for killing her off....Kikyou isn't one of my fav. charries, you should kill off Kouga too or have him get laid.....either one. Ummm is Kag and Miroku's Baby gonna come out a Miko? Hurry up and update.....I love this story and it's kinda funny. ~Cris~
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