| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 25, 2005 16:19 PST
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Ah Metamorphosis, one of the high points of my day. I'm afraid Sess is going to be so overconfident he sets himself up for disaster. Poor Kagura. Yea Inuyasha and Kagome. I love how she has such power over him with a kiss. Fluff! Wonderful fluff! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: optimusjoe On: January 25, 2005 15:28 PST
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So Kagome is going to spot him shaking the vial and think that he wasn't dreaming about her after all? She's just naïve enough to think that he might actually be thinking of someone else. That's my hypothesis of why Inuyasha will HAVE to tell her what's in his dreams... even if I'm wrong I know anything you come up with is going to be good... all hail the queen of angst and intrigue!
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 13:53 PST
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i loved it.. can't wait to see more. thank you
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 13:37 PST
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Noticed your comments on the toukai mating habits and I grinned sheepishly. I guess I've always admired the fact that you don't presume the marking rituals in most of your stories. Personally, I've always been one to write about it despite the fact that it hasn't been mentioned in the manga or anime. I dunno, I guess it's just something that makes sense to me. I loved this chapter, I love all your chapters, you're probably sick of hearing about it! *laughs* Anyway, keep it up, I can't wait 'til Kagome finds out they still need to shake the damned vial!
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Reviewed By: imsotired007 On: January 25, 2005 13:10 PST
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because i'm low on time and have TONS of work... this will be a quick review to say these past two chapters have been great woowoo! ... and now to compile wacky reviews bc that's easier than actual thought at the moment ... awesome... wow... =) ... O.O .... great chappie .... can't wait for the next one ... you roxxors ... andy anything else that qualifies as a silly review =)
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Title: No! No Monkey Shakes, Damnit! If you don't get your butt outta my face...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 11:22 PST
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Well, the kids have been properly intimidated into keep their secret (wonder how long it will last this time? Lil' Monkey-but blew the last one right off! LOL) ---- I really enjoyed the by-play between Kagura and Sesshoumaru. Mr. "Strong and Silent" still manages to put her mind at ease in spite of the real seriousness of her situation. If only there were some way she could tell him, round-about or indirectly...that's IF she can say anything even when no one is around. Extremely frustrating to be a puppet without a single blade around sharp enough to cut Hisadaicho's strings. --- Hehe, you've been dropping hints that InuYasha will have to eventually 'fess up about his dreams. I don't know if Kagome is going to be pissed that he's hiding things or shocked when she finally hears all the sordid details...probably both. She's really going to blister his ears on that one! Poor 'Yash. --- Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus... too damned lazy to sign in now... On: January 25, 2005 08:38 PST
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I feel so bad for Kagura. I kinda wish that Sesshoumaru would just beat the answer out of someone and 'fix' her. *sigh* anyways, im anticipating another sango/mari/kagome scene, i want to know how comfortable the girls are around each other now after sangos "supermommy" reaction, (i still cant believe that she even let what that woman said sink in, but then again i would probably do that same thing). If Hisadaicho already had a mate when she and Kouga went at it, does that mean hes mated to her but shes not mated to him? one last question... Sesshoumaru is how old again? a few hundred years? and hes just now mated... does that mean he was a virgin 300 yr old? or am i wrong to assume that once a youkai sleeps with someone for the first time they are mated. Wow im thinking about this way too much... ~Kat
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 07:35 PST
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ok, thx for answering, um i am a bit confused as to why you never use the KONGOUSOUHA if it is your favorite technique. (not to mention anything InuYasha uses it on would die immediately) lol (some spelling may be off in my reviews, sorry about that)
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Title: Awww....
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess not logged in On: January 25, 2005 06:38 PST
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Shippou wants a home just like Inuyasha. I sniffled at that one!
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: January 24, 2005 20:15 PST
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What can I say? That was amazng. I love how beautifully you depict everything..from the angst to the well..joinings. Each thing you do, and ways you put it is unique. I pray you keep writing fan fictions, cause I absolutely love what you are doing. It's great! It makes me want to start writing InuYasha fics...after I get my old Fushigi Yugi one up. ((wrote it a long, long time agao and needs alot of revision))
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 17:49 PST
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Poor Inuyasha. Always laughted at and no one respects him. The poor thing. Ha, Sesshoumaru sure showed Hisadaicho. Great part. Hope you update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 17:11 PST
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I'm so happy that Kagura's putting up a bloody good fight against Hisadaicho's control. It's kinda nice to have the cat out of the bad between Sessy and Kagura but still...it's not gonna be pretty. He's gonna want explainations but the question is will her be perceptive enough to understand that she's not talking because she *can't* not because she won't? Hmmm...depends on how emotional he's feeling (yes, I beleive that Sessy is quite capable of showing strong emotion, dammit!), I think. Nice use of tenseiga, by the way. Inu-Yasha and Kagome were sweet as always, but I gotta wonder what's gonna happen when she finds out he's still shaking the bottle?
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Reviewed By: Care102 On: January 24, 2005 16:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very sorry about what that author said to you. But they were so wrong. Please don't let him or her get to you, because you are a wonderful writer! And thousands of reviewers agree with me . Your lemon was not about sex, it was about love and that is what it portraid. Anyway that was such a cute chapter! I have a love hate relationship when it comes to that kind of medicine. Its great when your in pain but it is soo imbarising when you start to drewl. lol. Thank you very much for updating.
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Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in) On: January 24, 2005 14:37 PST
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HAHAH! I hated that stuff when I was kid. Always made me drool. What was it called? Ambisol? Something like that. I'm so glad you're still writing. Just think...you have more "true" reviewers for this story than people who are just looking for a lemon. I'm always excited to see that you're starting on a new story when you're already in the middle of writing, I don't know, five other stories! My friend is jealous. He hates the fact that you can write so many chapters for so many stories in one day, and he's still on the same chapter for his story for about a month already. LOL You're still my favorite. Always will be. I'm not sucking up. No. Never. LOL
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Title: Ummm, Post Script?
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 13:17 PST
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I was reading Angelica Incarnate's review again, and a thought popped into my icchi head. He was dreaming for 6 months before they come up with the talisman. Please tell me you HAVE a way for them to break the effects of the toxin WITHOUT having to re-enact the dreams. I don't think either of them have that kind of stamina?! I agree with you that Inu is an innocent, and the thing that put the spin on his dreams was his youkai blood. Our dreams are our subconcious talking and I believe that is where everyone's darkness dwells. It looks to me like it will be big brother who has to take care of this particular bad girl. He has his bone (no pun intended) to pick with Hisaciacho over Kagura. Oh, the plots within plots. I probably have even seen most of them. I do love looking though. Love, love, love, love, love!!!!!!
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