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Title: ffarg-Chapter 3 Bloody Fangs
Reviewed By: misslady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 03:07 CDT
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This is very good for a vampire story. Those are hard to find!! Please keep up the good writing. I would suggest though that you read through and check the grammar and some of the words that might need to be changed to ones that would sound better. Definitely help from a good beta would make this story flow better but I love the whole concept of it and look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!! Misslady
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Title: FFRG Review Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 13:09 CDT
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This was an interesting, albeit short, chapter. I rather felt that Kagome was a little off in characterization--she seemed much more cynical than she truly is. Claustrophobia is spelled that way ... other small errors that could be caught with the aid of a good, solid beta would help the small things that detract from your writing. The short, choppy sentences can be effective if used sparingly. Overuse leads to annoyance. Overall I'd say your dialogue was strong, and it was obvious that you took care when writing, as the only glaring error that struck me right away was the aforementioned misspelling of claustrophobia. Good, solid start otherwise! Thank you for submitting to FFRG!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 01:43 CDT
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this is really different from most crossovers... but i like it!!! its very creative plz update it asap
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Reviewed By: Sunnisha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm...Kagome's Anita and Kurama's Jean-Claude? Songo's Katherine, and Rin is that other girl. ^_^ I like the way you changed it around. Keep you the good work! And update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 20:45 CDT
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yay, You update!! know, the whole Rin thing was certainly a twist; now I'n curious. update again soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohmigod you have to update this again this story was good as shit you. My heart was racin the whole time.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:58 CST
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hee hee!!! I'm back!!! when are you going to update???????? do not mind me, I'm sugar high!!!!!! wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *slams into wall* wheeeeeee update!!!!!!!!! ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 16:35 CST
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Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it!! Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 21:59 CST
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Hmmmmmmmmm, very interesting!! I've been reading Vampire stories all night, and this is one of the best!!! please update soon!!! ~Tsuki-chan
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Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:32 CST
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update soon this is good
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:20 CST
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blackmail... use it at least once a month in addition to threats.
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Reviewed By: DreamVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 12:18 CST
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DV- Kawaii!!! I'm a major Kur/Kag fan, too. Chiisai- Really? Couldn't tell... -_-;;; DV- You keep quiet. Anywho, this looks like a great fic! I love the vampire/hunter thing. Hehe... Ganko- Again, couldn't tell, 'kicks a stack of Amelia Atwater-Rohdes books. DV- ANYWAYS if you relly like Kur/Kags, I Have a site suggestion! It's a Kur/Kag shrine called Imaginative love. Really cool! Here's the address See ya later!!!!!!!!!! http://www.katakoi.kloud-nine.com/
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is going on my fav list
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fic is very well written. i like this fic very much. i will continue to read this story and write review. you might want to write a better summery, i almost didn't read it. well untill next time, Ja ne.
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