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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 01:31 CST
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Oh, no... I can see now that coitus interruptus is about to occur.... Inuyasha and Kagome are about to get down to it and his big brother and a pervert and the rest are on their way to see it/them in the flesh. Hmmm...Will Miroku or Sesshoumaru or both get an eyefull... And, uh-oh, but won't Kagome and Inuyasha be in danger of dying if they don't 'complete' that last 'step'? Jeez, their first time will have to be a quicky while the others guard them? All they need now is for Kouga to pop in... But on the other hand, if they don't get to complete the last step, those two extremely powerful beings might be so sexually frustrated and angry at the interruption that they really do some damage to Naraku so he better watch out. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you are an evil one aren't you. That last chapter was just enough to make our mouths water, but leaving us despartly thristy. Please update soon this is torture.(Please excuse my spelling it was never my strong point)
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 13:12 CST
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Great Update! I luv your story!! Please update soon!!
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Title: Really good!
Reviewed By: torrieoreo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 13:53 CST
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I'm really enjoying this story. It seems to have a good balance between the passion and the humor. I like how Kagome and InuYasha both catch each other off balance now and then in their interactions. And you get a gold star for an excellent summary! Abstracting is a difficult and useful art.
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 (too lazy to log on) On: November 14, 2004 12:43 CST
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Great Update!! Please Update soon!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 09:58 CST
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Darn it! You just had to stop when it was getting really, really good, didn't you? ;) Please update soon and please make the chapters longer! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 11:46 CST
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wonderful story! Please update as soon as you can!^_^
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 09:54 CST
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Thanks for updating and I think you are moving the story along well. I'll eagerly watch for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: November 12, 2004 14:20 CST
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I like what I've read so far. Please continue the story and I hope to see an update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good begining , and you did a great job with the summary. I am really looking forward to the next chapter! So do me a favor and update soon.
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