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| "Yugi meets the Saber Dolls" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: Dragon and Sword On: April 23, 2005 11:13 CDT
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A very good chapter. You might want to have Katrina have the Light fairy effect monster Guardian Angel Joan. Also a good magic card to have is Ekibyo Drakmord, which stops a card from attacking and destroys it in two turns. A good magic card for Yugi is Contract with the Abyss and Des Koala, which inflicts 400 pts of Direct damage x how many monsters in the field. Another good card to add to Yugi's deck is Miracle Restoring, which allows him to draw either the Dark Magician or Buster Blader. Also, the dark and light magicians are low level magicians that can special summon DM and BB to the field to get the Dark Paladin out. That's all I can think of for Katrina and Yugi. If you need any more help, you know where to find me!
| Title: My opinion on this fanfic III
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 14:48 CDT
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OOPS! I reviewed Chapter 14 last Friday without checking for any new chapters! How embarrassing! Anyway, here's my opinion on Chapters 15 and 16... Wow. Joey defeated Rex. The crowd goes wild. Yay. Goddammit, Dartz! Why didn't you let Mai finish off that stupid Texan hick Katrina?! I didn't really give a flip about the Yugi vs. Weevil Duel (okay, maybe a little), but I really wanted to see Katrina's soul devoured by the Orichalcos! I hope they have a rematch soon, and that Mai kicks her redneck ass, and hooks up with Joey! I don't really care about the Joey+Mai pairing, but it's better that having Joey pair up with your irritating Original Character! As for your question at the end of Chapter 16, here's my answer, me being a male: I'd shun them, in favor of my dream goddess Téa Gardner! I'd take sexy-cute over sexy-"busty lusty" any day! (^_^) Besides, I'm quite the advocate of the Yugi+Téa pairing. I even wrote a lemon scene with them in my "Yu-Gi-Oh-Ji!" fanfic series, with more to come in the future! (^_^) And as for my YGO/SMJ lemon, which'll be a prequel to the aforementioned "Yu-Gi-Oh-Ji!" I shall leave you on that paradox. Until next time...
| Title: My opinion on this fanfic II
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 15:26 CDT
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Dammit, you dopey dumbasses of Doom (Heh heh, I love alliteration)! How could you lose to the Saber Dolls?! You suck as Anime villians! *sigh* It's pretty obvious that Joey's going to defeat Rex, and Yugi's going to do the same to Weevil, but I have a feeling that that annoying dipshit redneck Katrina's going to triumph over Mai! Please have Mai win, and have Joey pair up with her, or else I'll be very upset! DOWN WITH THE REDNECK BITCH! Anyway, I hope to have the first chapter of my YGO/SMJ lemon fic up in about 1-2 months (I'm quite busy with my other fics). As for the other crossover, I'm keeping it a secret for now! Ciao!(^_^)
| Reviewed By: dragonandsword On: April 01, 2005 23:47 CST
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I must admit that these last chapters of yours are good. Especially the special dragon that Joey had. It's a shame that he doesn't have that in the show. Anyways, I also like the Katrina/Joey coupling and the fact that Mai is in denial at the end of this chapter. All in all, another good set my man!
| Reviewed By: Ssaffr01 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 11:32 CST
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About your challenge, I'm willing to go for it. Also I'm working on some new stories and was wondering if you would review them for me.
| Title: My opinion on this fanfic
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 15:01 CST
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Well, this is pretty creative! A Yu-Gi-Oh!/Saber Marionette J crossover! You know, I think I will go ahead and write a lemon that crosses these two Anime together! But it won't be based on this fic exactly, it'll probably be set during a different time during the series, most likely post-Battle City. And I just might give the Saber Marionettes a part in the fic, and quite possibly another Anime might get thrown in, as well. Oh, and I'd like to take this opportunity to give a shout-out to certain Duelists in your fic... Rafael: You can do it! Crush Tiger with Guardian Eatos(sp?)! Alister: Your opponent's weak! Wipe Panther out with your mighty monsters! Valon: Kick Lynx's ass with your Armor monsters, or whatever you have! Joey: Just defeat Rex again. *yawn* I'm starting to tire of the whole Rex-hates-Joey thing already. Mai: Your Harpie Ladies can mop the floor with that redneck Katrina, even though you've been acting like quite the annoying bitch lately! Yugi/Yami: Whichever form you're in, you can defeat Weevil! And I miss the Dark Magician! Dammit, Seiyaryu's one of my favorite monsters! The great Dark Magician's perfect for you, no matter who you are! Well, good luck with the rest of the fic! (^_^)
| Title: Keyblade Blacksmith
Reviewed By: Carl Pina II On: February 09, 2005 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and all, so please update it soon. By the way I just remembered something. On Fanfiction.net you made a story that was a crossover between Yu-Gi-Oh! and Totally Spies. What happen to that story.
| Reviewed By: dragonandswordmaster On: January 25, 2005 20:23 CST
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Another good chapter here, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I just want to root for one person, GO Katrina! Show Mai what its like to hurt Joey's feelings! Katrina, I hope you win against the bitch who calloed you a whore (another reason that I'm rooting for her especially, cause I can't stand anyone calling someone else a whore.) Just don't make her lose DJ, otherwise I'd hate to see what my sword souls will do to you.
| Reviewed By: dragonandswordmaster On: January 16, 2005 01:51 CST
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Another nice chapter my friend, and I can't wait to see what else you have for this story, as well as all your other stories and stuff. I'm also surprised that i didn't get the hint about the wizard, since that is my favorite movie. If I had to make a list of all my favorite movies and video games from the 80's, I would have a list so huge that your head would explode. I have so much Nintendo games that are sadly collecting dust in the corner of some closet, as well as with the Super Nintendo, Nintendo 64, Playstation, and Sega Gensis. Now that is a lot of systems. So Katrina is going to go with the group, correct? If so, I'll try to make a deck for her, but I think one of her best cards should be the WingWeaver. Who knows, I had a deck theme that was Dark Dragon and consisted of Dark monsters and dragon cards, but that was before my mother threw them out, since I don't play with them much anymore though, sadly. I really wouldn't mind looking at some other great stuff from you my friend, and don't hesitate to give me a buzz anytime you feel like it at my yahoo account which is found on the other site. Also, what about classic rock? Maybe incorporate that into the story, perhaps? well, I happen to like Tea's concern for Yugi and that Yugi trusts Yami again, going to let him duel again. I can't wait to see the next chapter, especially if the dolls start dueling. When Kiaba comes to help, I hope that Yugi can find some way to keep the girls from being disected by his scientists. | Title: Dragon and Sword Master
Reviewed By: Dragon and Sword Master [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 21:31 CST
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Yes, I recognized them all, since I myself liked them when I was a kid. Still have my old NES and Super Mario Bros 3, but I don't think the old thing works nowadays sadly. Oh well, I liked the OC a lot, and I can think of at least two cards for her, St. Joan and Wingweaver. When I said two, I guess I meant four, heh. Oh well, I can't wait to see what else you havge for Yugi and the crew. Still wouldn't mind doing the Space Jam thing, but I have a challenge fic of my own. You say on another website that you like RPG games, and I'm going to assume that you've played both Kingdom Hearts and its semi-sequel Chain of Memories. If you have, I would definitely like to know if you have played these two great games, and I'll tell you all the details of the challenge fic, but I don't want to spoil the games if you haven't. I think that I have the best time writing long reviews about your work since they are so awesome that they make me want to write a review as long as this. well, ta ta for now my friend. Hopefully I'll see ya around.
| Reviewed By: Dragonandsword On: November 27, 2004 23:44 CST
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All I have to say is this: Very nice chapter and I had a good thanksgiving. Can't wait for Christmas. Anyways, do you think you should give the Dark Magician Girl to one of the Sailor Marionettes? Talk to you later i guess.
| Title: Saber Dollls
Reviewed By: Daniel de los Santos On: November 27, 2004 12:57 CST
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Once again DJ I'm telling you the blue haired Saber Doll is called Luchs
| Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 23:40 CST
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To Mike/Shobu: It's a real shame they cut the part when Joey punches Yami in the dub (the dub SUCKS!), but it's kinda obvious he did it.
| Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 23:37 CST
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Well, of course I always knew Yugi had it in him. Only faithful Yugi fans like us can see it! Loved his attitude, and the Saber Dolls when they jumped on Mai. They sure spice up this story! OC is so proud of him, even when she wants to jump on the Saber Dolls because of a jealous rage. ^_^
| Title: Hey DJ!
Reviewed By: Mike/Shobu On: November 23, 2004 09:25 CST
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You've done it again DJ! This chapter was great and it sucks that Yugi sacrificed himself to Yami! Don't worry, i've contacted Tv Tome and Yugi will return soon! great chapter and before I forget Joey punches the daylights out of Yami!
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