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Title: bravo!!!
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 11:03 CST
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wut a great chapter...the story is becomin' more intense that i luv it!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitkat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 21:57 CST
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very nice the scene of Hiei and Kurama training Kuwabara again, looks like a remake of their training for the Dark Tournament. That was a "deleted scene" i would've liked to see in the anime in more details than what was shown. Nice chapters so far, right now i'm on chapter 9 so... "I'll be back" (doing her best impersonation of Schwartzie). Kitkat
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the joy of another great chapter, and more of the mysteries revealed (I think). This is such a wonderful mix from the "dream" sequence at the beginning, the warmth and joy of the journey to Miru's house, the attack solely on Kurama at the house, and the troubling Kurama once in the house. The past tense expressions in the dream sequences, and Kurama's expectation (memory?) at the house are pulling together the intricate threads (I think) of this delightful story. I still have no idea of what to expect, although the ominous notes worry me (I hope for learning and fluff at the end). Wherever you take the story, and it is clear you know exactly where you're going, I know will reward all your readers. More soon, please.
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Title: Japanese
Reviewed By: Life of Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
out of pure curiousity, where did you find the Japanese terms? a web site, or a book, or what? i'd really like to know if you can tell me. Thanks, ~Darkfire~
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Title: Kitkat
Reviewed By: Kitkat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 14:48 CST
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I mean "couldn't be MORE happy" in my last review sorry for the missing word it might have confused you a bit.
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Reviewed By: Kitkatt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 14:44 CST
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Along with the fact that I didn't come to mediaminer very often the only explanation I have for not start reading this till now is your pen name (KitsuneSilver), it seems to be the name of a Kurama lover and Kurama lovers just enjoy too much to bash Kuwabara. Still I gave it a try and couldn't be happy because of it 'cause i've found a great story and I'm really glad you're not a Kuwabara basher, since i'm a Kuwabara fan i always try to read stories that take him as a serious character and respect him even if he not the main focus of story. This is a very nice story and i'm still on chapter 5 but enjoying it greatelly. One of the things i'm more glad about is how much in character all tantei are. I'll stay tuned for more. Kitkat
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! The transition from dream to "reality" was particularly smooth, and the scenes between Hiei and Kurama, Yusuke and Kuwabara were touching. I loved Kurama's finally being able to truly laugh, and yet underneath it all, forboding lurks (particularly the avoidance of the whip shop). I hope you are able to return soon with more!
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Reviewed By: Life of Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read that story too. it was creepy, but neat all the same. anywho, i love the story so far. the beginnings always make me wonder. i must continue reading. ttyl! ~Darkfire~ ps- i just remembered, if you are not already reading my series (either of them) i would greatly appreciate it if you would and tell me what you think. just a thought. thanks.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good...love the way you added japo and english together...it's like..Perfect ^__^ being a slasher I would have like to seen kurama and hiei together BUT this is still quiet woundwerful..
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Reviewed By: once again an amazin' job!!! On: December 03, 2004 14:22 CST
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absolutely profound & havin' so much depth which makes this story all the better!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such an amazing story...plz continue cuz itz such a fabulous story and im dyin' 2 no the end....keep up this excellent work...it truly has been such a looooong time since i've read such fantastic work!!!
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