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Reviewed By: kikira-san On: January 18, 2005 22:18 CST
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I'm insanely scared out of my mind now. I want everyone to be happy now. sniff. Gah that last bit with Kurama and Hiei and then the stuff with Yusuke and the authors note! the authors note! my toes curled! you're going to do something not happy aren't you? *cringe* Why does this have to be such a good story that I can't stop reading it?
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Title: w00h00
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 10:14 CST
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EXCELLENT EXCELLENT CHAPTERZ!!!!...KEEP'EM COMIN'!!!! ^o^!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hieis Shadow (too lazy to sign in) On: January 09, 2005 19:04 CST
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I love this fic very much! I would have commented a long time ago, but MediaMiner was being a butt! Anyways, awesome story! I especially love the Kurama and Hiei interaction
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 16:37 CST
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One thing...in the summary six years were mentioned. That means that none of them would still be in school unless Kuwabara and Yusuke went on to graduate school.
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Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have been reading this fic for the past cupple of hours or so and i must say i just cant stop reading it, tho i cant help buh wunder "where is the realtionship for kurama and hiei?" about 19 chapters into it i start to get a feel of it, but yet it is still very friend to friend. When kurama asks do you love me and he agrees, i am not sure wheater to take it as a freindly liking or not, so mayb yu can help me out here? other than i wish for their luvv (it sed yaoi ryte lol) to come about, i enjoy your fiction very very much and itd b wunderful if yud update =] i am dying to find the ending to this all = Fox
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 19:17 CST
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another great chapter. Kurama is really starting to freak me out now. he's seemed to come out of the mood swingy stage, but now he's in a 'the-real-world's-a-bitch' type phase. very warped world you've created here. i love it! :) i really hope Hiei can finally get some answers out of Kurama next chapter. i'm sure we'd all like to know what's really going on with him. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. i've been reading it on e-fiction.org at first, but now i'll start reading it here. it's kinda scary, actually, how Kurama is losing it. he's always so stable, it kinda throws everything else out of whack. but i love how Hiei is taking control when it's needed. even Yusuke's learneed enough to make a good diversion. they've all grown so much *crying* (just joking) but great story, update soon!
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Title: bravo!!!
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 11:03 CST
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wut a great chapter...the story is becomin' more intense that i luv it!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitkat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 21:57 CST
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very nice the scene of Hiei and Kurama training Kuwabara again, looks like a remake of their training for the Dark Tournament. That was a "deleted scene" i would've liked to see in the anime in more details than what was shown. Nice chapters so far, right now i'm on chapter 9 so... "I'll be back" (doing her best impersonation of Schwartzie). Kitkat
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the joy of another great chapter, and more of the mysteries revealed (I think). This is such a wonderful mix from the "dream" sequence at the beginning, the warmth and joy of the journey to Miru's house, the attack solely on Kurama at the house, and the troubling Kurama once in the house. The past tense expressions in the dream sequences, and Kurama's expectation (memory?) at the house are pulling together the intricate threads (I think) of this delightful story. I still have no idea of what to expect, although the ominous notes worry me (I hope for learning and fluff at the end). Wherever you take the story, and it is clear you know exactly where you're going, I know will reward all your readers. More soon, please.
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Title: Japanese
Reviewed By: Life of Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
out of pure curiousity, where did you find the Japanese terms? a web site, or a book, or what? i'd really like to know if you can tell me. Thanks, ~Darkfire~
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Title: Kitkat
Reviewed By: Kitkat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 14:48 CST
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I mean "couldn't be MORE happy" in my last review sorry for the missing word it might have confused you a bit.
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Reviewed By: Kitkatt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 14:44 CST
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Along with the fact that I didn't come to mediaminer very often the only explanation I have for not start reading this till now is your pen name (KitsuneSilver), it seems to be the name of a Kurama lover and Kurama lovers just enjoy too much to bash Kuwabara. Still I gave it a try and couldn't be happy because of it 'cause i've found a great story and I'm really glad you're not a Kuwabara basher, since i'm a Kuwabara fan i always try to read stories that take him as a serious character and respect him even if he not the main focus of story. This is a very nice story and i'm still on chapter 5 but enjoying it greatelly. One of the things i'm more glad about is how much in character all tantei are. I'll stay tuned for more. Kitkat
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! The transition from dream to "reality" was particularly smooth, and the scenes between Hiei and Kurama, Yusuke and Kuwabara were touching. I loved Kurama's finally being able to truly laugh, and yet underneath it all, forboding lurks (particularly the avoidance of the whip shop). I hope you are able to return soon with more!
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Reviewed By: Life of Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read that story too. it was creepy, but neat all the same. anywho, i love the story so far. the beginnings always make me wonder. i must continue reading. ttyl! ~Darkfire~ ps- i just remembered, if you are not already reading my series (either of them) i would greatly appreciate it if you would and tell me what you think. just a thought. thanks.
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