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Reviewed By: reina q [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. I like how you make the characters thoughts seem so intense.
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: June 18, 2005 04:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow now more please I really like this story and i want to know more about it. 'Orion
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 01:47 CDT
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Thank you so much for continuing the story! You really made my day! And it [the chapter, not necessarily the day] was very good, too! I wasn't really looking for mistakes, but I caught one slight typo, near the end of the chapter when Kagome is struggling against the pull (there's a "2"). But that's trivial. :D Oh, and I'm happy to have helped encourage you to continue, even if I was simply telling the truth. You are a great writer! :D
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Reviewed By: Zach On: June 10, 2005 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please finish the story, i've read all the chapters through in the last hour or longer, VERY GOOD! the inuyasha writers would probably like for you to join the team lol...ur writing has great imagery, it's really like i'm watching an inuyasha movie, and a good one too!
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Title: Please don't leave us hanging
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love how original and incredibly well written your story is. Truly. I've read so many fan fics written by people (your age and older) and the pale in comparison. Some of them don't even merit being in the same line-up, really. Most of the IY fandom writes terribly, and I'm happy to say that you are one of the select few that really stand out and shine. I'm terribly picky (grammar, plot, spelling, characterization, etc.) and canon-thumping (for the most part) and that leaves me with such a scant amount of fics to read, so that makes me all the more compelled to implore that you continue. I hate getting sucked into great stories and not seeing them come to fruition... It's so upsetting. Makes me want to cry really. Please try to finish this story. I know how inspiration can fade away when a project lingers too long or things get stifled, but I'd love to see how you wrap things up. In any event, I'm definitely going to check out some more of your work. You're a fabulous writer!
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 26, 2005 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY your doing great this chapter ROCKED it showed alot of change and stuff. I don't like the fear of Inu that Kag has and i hope she'll get better SOON I'll miss this story if it goes on break I hope you will still be able to update. I like the story and I think the plot is still in force. and doing well. what your doing is giving your story demention. Its good don't forget that. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 25, 2005 21:40 CST
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W0oT! Kagome and Kikyou team up against the Fate Sealer...this is gonna be good.
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 22, 2005 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another CLIFFY!!!!!! AAAGGGGGGG falls on floor @.@ waaaa. only a few homophones to worry aobut but nothing that made me go "WHAT THE HELL DOSE THAT MEAN?" Don't worry about errors if people can't read around them then they obiously can't fully engage thier creative selves :P 'Orion
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 18, 2005 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA so sad so sad :( :( Shippo's mommy and daddy WAAAAAAA Great chapter and not even a cliffy YEA!!! I wonder what village Kikyou was in? hummm i have my guess and i hope it is wrong. but it would be intresting if I wasn't wrong. just another exammple of how much Kagome has affected the past hummm More please. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 02:34 CST
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Just found this...not bad. Interesting plot, though it looks as if I've come in at the tail end of the story. Better late than never. I'd really like to see how you end this. Poor Kagome, she's going through a tough time and InuYasha is inconsolable. Please, continue.
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 17, 2005 23:56 CST
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Good chappy. I want longer chappies though. Quit leaving on a cliffhanger!!!! aaaggggg i'm going crazy with the rash of them you've been focing on us. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 17, 2005 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u are too evil for words I was really looking foreward to a good long read...I had too long a day teaching english...sigh...sigh Great eeri description of the arrivle of the Fate Sealer...NOW DESCRIBE THE THING!!!! can't wait to see what it looks like. hurry por favor onigaishimasu please! 'Orion
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Title: Update or I'll die...
Reviewed By: ~Lati~ On: January 16, 2005 17:58 CST
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I'm not bothering to rate it, 'cause they're all 20s anyways (the scale burst). you have to updateNOW!!!! I will die soon if you don't. I only read up to chapter 9, hehe!! But I'm still reading and if you're that desperate for reviews, what the heck?? my username is latianna, but I didn't bother to log on (too lazy!!) pleaz don't include my name in the story...ok? (i don't want otherz 2 see...kinda meek, if you understand..)thanx!!^.^
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 16, 2005 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh oh ooh more more more great great great taerg taerg taerg erom erom erom hoo ho ho Please more 'orion
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Reviewed By: HuHu_huggiez On: January 14, 2005 18:11 CST
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oo wow that made me cry ...... lol update!! @_@'
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