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Title: Ch 2
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: April 29, 2005 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only on ch 2 so far, but you've got me hooked. I like Yusuke and am happy to see such a well thought out, more mature story. Can't wait to read the rest! Only problem I have are a few typos, words missing that might be editing issues, stuff like that. Otherwise, this looks like a great story. Keep up the good work.
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Title: hi again!!!
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful new chapter!! Keep up the good work!!!...[I think my last comment was cut off before because I recall it being slightly longer than that but whatever!!]...^O^!!!...I
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Title: ( bookwormloverjen )
Reviewed By: bwlj On: April 27, 2005 12:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, im still wide eyed, that was great plz keep up the great story
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Title: SUPERB!!!
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How absolutely cruel to leave the story the way it is?!?! Cliff hangers never make fans happy...lol...anyway I just wanted to say that I absolutely have fallen in love with your story. Also I am a very HUGE fan of YxKxH
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: katiepatie (not logged in) On: April 22, 2005 16:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a review from an extremely happy reader...great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (too lazy to login) On: April 21, 2005 18:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! 2 down, 1 to go. Now just for Hiei to admit he loves them both. Great chapter as always! Update soon!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 22:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter. I can't wait for Yusuke and Hiei to mate as well. Then we can have a totally hot 3some, ne ^_~ Really great writing. You are so creative. I don't know how you come up with these plots.
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Reviewed By: sisko66002(not signed in) On: April 20, 2005 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic and will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter even if I'll never like the idea of Yusuke fighting in a team tournement withou Hiei and Kurama on his team. But I still like the story anyway. And if ya took that last part as a flame i'm sorry cause i don't mean to flame.
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Reviewed By: k-girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 07:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
write the next chapter please.^_^
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
great chappy as usual keep it up. But one things got me... If Kurama is mated with both Yusuke & Hiei does that make Hiei & Yusuke mates too? Of course if they are, then all the better. Oh & BTW I love how you threw in The Bouncer. I love that game!
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Title: wide-eyed and waiting for the next chpt
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant wait for the next chpt, very good, ( clapps hands and giggles ) i cant wait to see what hiei tells kurama ( giggles some more ) anyhow, craziness aside, this is a great story plz update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: kit-kit On: March 31, 2005 16:01 CST
Comment/Review:
great chapter i can't wait to see what hiei has to say to kurama
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 31, 2005 01:36 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I love this chapter its great and i cant wait to see what happends next ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: kit-kit On: March 27, 2005 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i finally found your other updates and it was cool. i loved the chapters and i got to read the lemon which i thought was great though i wonder will yusuke and hiei and maybe kurama get to have there fun.
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 20, 2005 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
OMg I love it i can't wait to see what happends next so update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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