| "My Savior" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 07:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! write more*sobs uncaontrollably
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Reviewed By: SIT! On: May 24, 2005 18:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More I need more! Please as soon as you get the chance, update!!!!!
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Title: gcdv
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 03:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon..tht last chapter was way cool....keep it up and update.(lol..used the word up twice in one sentence.)
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Reviewed By: Sesshiei On: May 16, 2005 17:46 EDT
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I really like the story! You're doing great( and especially with the last Chapter)! I Can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 17:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
KILL HIM! KILL HIM! I hate him! Make him pay with his life! oh... and update soon!
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Reviewed By: DeJaVooo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with your fic ^_^ great job and keep it up! um...a question any ideas on the finaly paring??(or did i miss something?) or waint its going to be h/k ?? or i am blind anyway...update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 16:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! update soon! i bet hojo's behide everything about wanting kagome! hiei's gonna kill-- him---! yay! lol. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: May 03, 2005 21:39 EDT
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OMG so Hojo is after her! WOW well i love it and i cant wait to see what happends next so you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 21:12 EDT
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OMG the guy whos after Kag, ITS HOJO! ...isnt it? Hiei is gonna be maad... I gotta know whats gonna happen next! PWEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Georgiea1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 19:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading chapter 11 and had to tell you I really enjoy your story. I find it unique, interesting, and entertaining. The pace you set is great at keeping my attention - I get bored easily. There are some grammatical/typo and thought trend issues (thought wandering has occurred) that could be fixed, but I have noticed an improvement as the story has progressed. My only suggestion is to not rely on spell checkers too much - a word can be correctly spelled but used incorrectly (i.e., he/her). When I am writing things for work, I find reading them out loud helps with comprehension: I really hate to send out things that could give the wrong impression of me. I noticed in some of your author notes that you apologize for not giving enough detail or leaving things out, so I just wanted to tell you that I have never noticed any such thing - maybe I just have a really good imagination or realize it is just a story. Also, if you have any reading recommendations (lately I have been partial to Hiei and Kagome pairings) they would be appreciated - I like your writing so I'm hoping that we'll have similar tastes. Feel free to email me at georgiea1@hotmail.com. There my ramble is done! Keep the chapters coming!
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Title: Chap: 6
Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 16:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, very nice. I L-O-V-E-D IT, great job
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Title: Chap: 5
Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 15:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooo, THA WAS AWSOME!!!!! man i'm still hungry. may be oc but i love it there's another fic of yours that i like but i can't remember its name...started with a cC i think
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Title: Chap: 3
Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excuse me... u suck at battle scenes? THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE SEEN!!! great job^_^
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Title: Chap: 2
Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 14:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good. being hiei/kag pairing you've gotten on my good side. going to start reading next chap. expect me to Read&Review every chap. man i'm hungery *pulls out a mike and candy bar with a thoughtful look* I GOT IT!!!! the word of the day is.....PLAYTIME(not the kiddie kind either) and that concludes todays random word. now where is he...*starts looking arround for hiei*
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Title: CHAP: 1
Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, but try to make the chaps longer.
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