| "My Savior" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: Our Lady of Sorrows On: May 01, 2005 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome chapter Hojo looks kinda suspicious i love your story update soon
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 21:36 EDT
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ACK! Evil cliffy!! Where i Hiei when she needs him? Please update soon, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: c-tesshin On: April 19, 2005 08:14 EDT
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Your story is beautiful, yeah, that's the word. And of course I'll keep reading and rewieving it as long as you have the talent to write it ^^ which I hope will be long. (No need for an answer)
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Reviewed By: yokoukuramasuichi On: March 25, 2005 19:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
personaly i really enjoy it i think you should keep writing it it my self
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 11:39 EST
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loved this chapter! Please update soon! I want to know what happends next!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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How the HELL does Hojo know about demons??? That ... ain't right. Creepy! Hiei better hold on tight to Kagome! Kurama ... good luck ... you're gonna need it! And Miroku and Botan? I just don't see that. Hmmm. Oh well, I'll think about it. More please, soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 20:53 EST
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Update again soon please. I repeat myself alot, but I just want some one to update. I'd give you ideas, but I'm at a big ol block with my fics.
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Title: 5
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 14:35 EST
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that was an AWESOME chapter and its OK if Hiei is a bit OOC:D
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Reviewed By: Phalon22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 22:14 EST
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Miroku and Botan is something different. I like all the couples, maybe Hojo could be Naraku's reincarnation, cuz then Naraku could get his butt kicked YET AGAIN. So no Inuyasha Reincarnation?
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 07:23 EST
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I like the story (after all, Hiei is my favorite pairing for Kagome, after Inuyasha). I did think Kagome moved onto heavy petting pretty quickly from her first kiss but I guess there are extenuating circumstances -- I imagine she still has the feeling that any day could be her last, especially since she is still the guardian.(Here is where I would put in a new paragraph if I knew how) You peaked my curiousity by having Hojo recognize Hiei's youki. Bash Hojo all you like or make him misguided but don't make Kuwabara an idiot because he's not. Remember that when he's making these pronouncements (and sometime failing) he's 14. Also, it take a lot of bravery to confront the same demons as one's much stronger comrades. But you knew that, I'm sure. (another paragraph)One thing I didn't get, is how old the human and demi-human members of the tantei are supposed to be in this fic.
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Reviewed By: Annaku On: February 27, 2005 23:20 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like yuor fic. and your updatig time is ok if a little slow. but the dog collar come on. it seams a little more sutied twards inu-yasha. but inu vistiting him in his dreams really cool. and the bracelets sheer brilliens. please keep updating. (P.S. sorry about the spelling mistakes.)
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 22:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!! PLease update again soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: February 27, 2005 19:02 EST
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OMG I love this chapter you have got to update it really soon. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: ~HIEI LOVERS~ On: February 27, 2005 09:45 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I would gladly help you with your story if you accept. I hope you do. I also liked this chappie.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 11:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I can't believe it!!! You used my idea!!! Wow!!! I'm so glad you liked it. Anyway another great chapter. Write more soon!
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