| "My Savior" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: moga wachutu On: December 04, 2004 11:51 EST
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i love your story i can't wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: Aleigh On: December 04, 2004 10:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 06:20 EST
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another XCELLENT chapter...I"m surprised that Sango was so easily convinced...can't wait to see Miroku's reaction to Boton...that would be a fun pairing...hehehe:D
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Reviewed By: Drew Garza On: December 01, 2004 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is really good i couldnt stop reading it, so i was heartbroken when i had to leave to go to my guitar lesson. Keep it up and i'll keep reading... k? ~Drew rockguitar1989@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander*changing pen name to DragonOfDarkness* On: November 29, 2004 16:12 EST
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I dont mind Hiei being OOC so much. Just dont make him cry or something like that. A lot of authors i've read make Hiei cry and thats *thinks of a polite phrase* NOT natural.If something bad happens, he's more liable to get angry than to go off and cry. A sweet Hiei is better than a sappy one. And yes, I think that if you can manage it, a Sango/Kurama, Miroku/Botan pairing would be good! Update soon! ur bud~~aliya
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 15:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappy!! Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 03:46 EST
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I don't give a rats @ss who he sounds like...that was so AWESOME!!! I LOVED this chapter...IT WAS FANTASTIC...can't wait for the next one:D
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Reviewed By: tessie On: November 29, 2004 01:34 EST
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occ? i dont' think so. i really like it. who cares anyway, lol. it's your story, write it as it comes. it's best not to force a story or change it. i love the way you've written them.
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blink* *blink* 0.0 I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY!!!!! It's really good! The only thing is I think Hiei moved a bit too fast I mean... It's Hiei. But I don't care your story is great anyways! Wow let me think...*thinks about first chapter...thinks about other chapters...You know thats a big diference in lenth...I'm happy! At first I could only read the first chapter and it was so short T_T I am really happy that you made the chapters longer!
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Title: Funny fic
Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 00:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cute, cute fic. You had me giggling throughout the story. Even though Hiei and Kagome are OOC, they are funny and interesting. I do hope you put in a lemon.
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Reviewed By: insane anime On: November 27, 2004 23:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is getting good. and you could always just not add in everyone else.
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Reviewed By: Baradsa On: November 27, 2004 18:55 EST
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i love this story please give me another chapter i'm begging here on knees even i'll be your slave for life just please give me a chapter!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 19:16 EST
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honestly you don't need them..this story is GREAT jsut as it is...LOL...oh man cant wait to see what she will try to surprise him w/hehehe...w/that whole mind reading thing and everything...that was GREAT THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 19:01 EST
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the battle scene was ok w/me...that was AWESOME...but I thought that Kag should be able to better protect her mind
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 18:44 EST
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he slept?? COOL...what did Inu-Yasha do this time???
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