| "Midnights Call" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: January 25, 2005 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this. The sense of intrigue and mystery in this one keeps me coming and looking for updates. thanks! Wlfhund
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Title: pyropixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 19:14 CST
Comment/Review:
This is good ^___^
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Reviewed By: Gothic_Beauty9000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I promise that I am enjoying this story and really look forward to any and all updates that you post in the future! ^.~ Sry 4 not reviewing b4. -_- I'll try to do better!
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Title: meow mix jinggle?
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was too good keep up the good work and i just need to kno did kagome go in the past throught the well then came back and forgot it all? or was that flashback in just one of thouse see your past life dreams things? please tell me i just love your fic and dont wanna get confuzed by just that one part so keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE? MREOW!!!!! ^___________^
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Title: Jennifer
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! i liked chapter 5 lol....one of my favorites! I cant wait for the other chapters to come out...and i like kouga and sesshomaru so it is neet having them in a fanfic together....because they r so sexy! lol ----------Jenn
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Title: did you kno that i just sat here w/ myt mouth open i could attract fie's? thats what my mommers told me!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW............ that was a really really good fic keep up your good work and update thouse chapy's soon ok i just LOVE Sesshy fic's guess what i went to hot topic the other day and they had Sesshomaru plushies and guess whop has one now.........? ME!!!! -hugs Sesshy as if life depened on it- ok well update again soon please yo8u have sparked my intrest very very much and i cant wate to find out what happens and i just loved that poem where did you find it at?
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Title: *
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 14:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad that my review helped lol! I'm also glad that you have those chapters finished and can't wait to read them!!! And i have to ask....are you a big Sesshomaru fan?? -------Jennifer
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: =) On: November 30, 2004 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! that was really good lol.... espically the last chapter...like he was calling out to her...god he is damn sexy.....can;t wait for ur next chapter =) --------------------Jennifer
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: =) On: November 30, 2004 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! that was really good lol.... espically the last chapter...like he was calling out to her...god he is damn sexy.....can;t wait for ur next chapter =) --------------------Jennifer
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Reviewed By: mistykid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay,great story. but the second chapter is the same as the first. just to let you know. but overall the story was good. keep p the good work.^_^*
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Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos (FF.Net) On: November 16, 2004 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot here has promise. But I'd advise you sincerely to invest in a beta-reader, as the grammar is quite atrocious. You underline random things, you don't put dialogue in quotation marks, you type "hehehehe" when you could simply say "She giggled".... Like I said, the plot has promise. It's the grammar that is the problem.
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