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Reviewed By: shaddowstalker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
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i luv this story i read it before. i thought the first time it was good but it'll probably be even better now but no offence i think u should look into grammer, spelling, missing words in sentences.
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Reviewed By: paniwi (not logged in) On: January 24, 2005 06:08 CST
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totally friggin awesome!!!!!!!!!, This was one of the best humor/yaoi fics I've ever written. Plz write more more more more story's soon.
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: January 17, 2005 03:50 CST
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please continue, I don't even wanna know where you got you inspiration from, I love it though
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 16:42 CST
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You are one messed up person and I love ya for it. This is getting better all the time. Mokuba on a sugar high (hehehe), that was good. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 12:15 CST
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OMG, you made me laugh again, I wonder what's gonna happen. Again POOR POOR JOU. plz update
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Title: Ohhh!!!
Reviewed By: shipposister [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 22:52 CST
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Please Please Please update...I love this. Waiting breathlessly. MaggieMay
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Reviewed By: paniwi (not logged in) On: December 18, 2004 12:09 CST
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yippee, you updated, my gosh, this just keeps getting better and better. plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is so funny, will poor jou EVER get the chance to talk to someone non-horny? I can't wait till you update again
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 06:21 CST
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that was really funny, though I to noticed that some words were missing and some spelling mistakes. But apart from that it's a cool fic. Especially when jounounchi hears the yami's and hikari's talking. I hope that marik and malik will come in to. One more suggestion, don't beat Anzu up, I know people like that but in this fic I think it would ruin the mood a bit. Plz update soon
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very good. I notice that some of the first words in the sentence aren`t on here. You might want to check that out and try to reload it. I had to on my first one. It came out not looking right. Just a suggestion. You might want to look for a beta, I noticed a few spelling and grammitical errors. I would be happy to do that if you want. I have some free time. Just click on my name and go to my e-mail or anubiset@hotmail.com. Keep going this is a great fic, I love how Jou can read minds and what he has found out about Yugi, can`t wait to see what he finds out about Ryou and the others.
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Title: Cool chappie
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 23:35 CST
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Cool chappie , can't wait till the next one.
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Reviewed By: Sprinket [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i liked the fic, you've got really kewl ass humour ^-^ hope that you will update soon
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Reviewed By: sesshyandkuramasgirl On: November 22, 2004 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! please u HAVE to update soon, k? cant wait bye
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Title: Um was it suppose to be like that?
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 00:15 CST
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Um was the sentences suppose to be cut off like that? Just wondering? Like some of them seemed like they were missing the first word, not sure if you did that on purpsose? Other than that I like the story alot.
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Title: Ra that was so funny
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ra that was so funny, So the collar allows Jou to hear the Yami and Hikari's conversations, that's so cool. "That must of been a site to see," watching Jou's reaction as Yugi describing what he did to Yami last night. I wonder what there going to do in the bathroom *ahem* or what Jou's going to here next. Please continue, I thought the lemony content was pretty good too.
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