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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 05:33 CST
Comment/Review:
interesting story... ^^
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Title: LOVELY GOODNESS
Reviewed By: Sunshynesurfer On: December 01, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: December 01, 2004 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
hmm...lets see where to start. your writting techinque is good and the plot that you have put together is superb. you have some gray areas with some stuff like chapter 7 Sango flips when she sees InuYasha in Kag's appartment but she was there when he came in for an interview. also Sesshoumaru is pleasent with InuYasha pretending to be a girl on stage (which i thougth was priceless). great addition with the dog...i so agree with his logic. snuggles. its perfect. just watch the plot developments and character motivations. you have a good thing forming here. good luck with it.
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Title: loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inu/saku On: November 25, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wish there were more chapters because i can not wait until u have the next couple of chapters written so i can read them and write another review. so i incourage you to this story to the end.also if you ever write a book when your older and it gets published I will most diffently read it!!!!!!!!!
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Title: oooh
Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 18:06 CST
Comment/Review:
It's scorching! hahahaha, Mr. Boss...I hope you update soon, because that preview was such a teaser! Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Title: Oh no
Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 17:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I haven't even started reading this, and I can already tell it's going to be priceless...Inu/Kag as room-mates...beware!!!! Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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