| "The Roommate" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: shania On: February 15, 2005 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, I realy like this fic n besides the occasional grammar problems, it has a cool plot. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bryanna DM On: February 13, 2005 22:07 CST
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I'm clicking, but my dreams aren't coming true...Sorry, had to say it. ^_^ I really love your story. It's really cool, definitely different from others I've read. Anyway, about the beta part, I'd like to help (especially if it has anything to do with correcting grammar and things like that). My e-mail address is ryu_hitori_lenore_evans@yahoo.com. Thanks! (for writing the story, anyway)
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: February 13, 2005 08:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll be your beta! it's mari_jang_6969@hotmail.com plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: kb On: February 12, 2005 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Keep up the good work. The preview of the next chapter is great, I'm anxious for the update.
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 07:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz plz plz plz plz plz update!!!!!!!!!! i luv this story and want to continue reading!!!!
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Reviewed By: kafeen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME STORIE!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: shrine^maiden On: January 20, 2005 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! !!!! TOO AWESOME TO STOP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP WRITING! YOU ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animejunkie221 On: January 17, 2005 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awesome! Please update soon! I don't know if I'll be able to wait too much longer. Did you know that this story creates happiness? I just got my cousin and her psyco boyfriend to read it and he wants to build a shrine to worship your utter kick-ass-ness. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 11:53 CST
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AWESOME STORY!!!!! Poor Snuggles!!!! Anyway, PLEASE update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 05:33 CST
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interesting story... ^^
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Title: LOVELY GOODNESS
Reviewed By: Sunshynesurfer On: December 01, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitlov eitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveit loveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitlov eitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveit. Did i put my point across?
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: December 01, 2004 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
hmm...lets see where to start. your writting techinque is good and the plot that you have put together is superb. you have some gray areas with some stuff like chapter 7 Sango flips when she sees InuYasha in Kag's appartment but she was there when he came in for an interview. also Sesshoumaru is pleasent with InuYasha pretending to be a girl on stage (which i thougth was priceless). great addition with the dog...i so agree with his logic. snuggles. its perfect. just watch the plot developments and character motivations. you have a good thing forming here. good luck with it.
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Title: loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inu/saku On: November 25, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wish there were more chapters because i can not wait until u have the next couple of chapters written so i can read them and write another review. so i incourage you to this story to the end.also if you ever write a book when your older and it gets published I will most diffently read it!!!!!!!!!
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Title: oooh
Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 18:06 CST
Comment/Review:
It's scorching! hahahaha, Mr. Boss...I hope you update soon, because that preview was such a teaser! Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Title: Oh no
Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 17:36 CST
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I haven't even started reading this, and I can already tell it's going to be priceless...Inu/Kag as room-mates...beware!!!! Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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