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| "We Belong" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Title: MATTA!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are fast becoming my fave authoress y'know that????? Bloody freakin HELL, how do you manage to captivate me like this? As for turning Inuyasha into an 'f' bomb machine, I do the same thing, you aren't alone! *laughs* He's really got a foul mouth if you translate the scans from overseas, a friend of mine does it herself. Makes me wonder why Kagome hasn't given him the soap. I always did LOVE pairing one of Kagome's friends up with Houjo, although, I usually made it Ayumi who wound up with him. Brilliant work, I can't freaking WAIT for the next chapter. Ja matta ne from a loyal fan, Yoake
| Reviewed By: nyagoneko On: January 24, 2005 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am confused the story does not seem finished but it says completed in the status. Are you really going to leave it like that? Please tell me you are going to finish it. I am thoroughly engrossed in this story and can't wait for you to go on.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 23:03 CST
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O.O That was unexpected... Inuyasha commisioning a kimono for Kagome? Hm... how did he know her measurements...And there's the question that'll plague me for a while... You had me believing that Kagome's dream was real for... the whole time it lasted. It was a general 'eh? Surely he isn't that impatient 'bout th- oh...' reaction.I can't wait to read your next chapter! I want to see where this is going! I also am a little curious about this, as Kagome and Miroku are blessing the ceremony, wouldn't Kagome wear the traditional miko robes? Of course, I don't know this, but I am curious.
| Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 04:36 CST
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Thank you, Lord, my prayers have been answered and this story updated!!! (does the happy dance) WOO-HOO! I was beginning to worry about when I would get to see the latest and greatest chapter from you...and this one kicked bootie!! I LOVED it!! But now, I gotta wait for the next, dangit! And oh, yeah, so if Inu had the kimono commisioned WEEKS ago, then he MUST have had some inkling into his feelings for Kag, right? Oh, god, just update... PLEASE!!
| Title: well worth the wait =)
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 20:13 CST
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Well if every chapter is going to be this massive and so well written, no one should complain about a wait ^_~ What a wonderful peek into that adorable head of InuYasha's... I think you had his insecurity and his war with the idea of "feelings" quite accurate. I'm of the opinion Kagome would have been more... not embaressed, but shaken up by her dream. I disagree on the idea of more detail--she's too innocent for her mind to add too many more details--but I think she would have agonized more about what her subconscious was doing to her. Lol, as much as she admits she wants him. The kimono as a gift was a really sweet touch and I'm curious to see what kind of plot conflicts with unfold from the many informational details given in this chapter. And I do so hope InuYasha shows up and he and Kagome get an alone moment or two, lol. Keep up the beautiful work! ~angelica
| Reviewed By: Cat61 On: January 21, 2005 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That about says it all.:) A well-written, developed story. So far....need more chapters*nods vigorously* Updates keep readers happy, happy readers write reviews^-^. Seriously though, so far this fic is wonderful, I hope to see an update on it sooner rather than later. It's nice to see the characters being explored more in depth, and i's also good to see Kagome resolving to clear things up with friends and Hojou too...poor guy can't catcha break, can he? Good luck, and update soon!
| Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: January 21, 2005 00:03 CST
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Another wonderful chapter! I hope you update again soon because I still like this story. Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 17:01 CST
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This is looking more promising as you add more chapters; I fell in love with the 1st chapter instantly! The 2nd chapter, I didn't think it was slow at all, in fact it covered a great deal of characterizations and background info. I though the extra elements between Inuyasha's thoughts on love were well concluded and Kagome's reasons for her insistence to stay as individual and less like her predecessor was a great addition. Pointing out the differences between time periods was something that was addressed and so letting us in on how love would be a rare oddity and especially for a hanyou. I thought the small insert on how the children playing with swords shouting out Tessiga was also a great addition; you sold the story to your punters and came out with a profit! I look forward to reading more.
| Title: More detailed review for you..
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your first chapter was done quite well yet the second one, like you said, was a little slow. Nevertheless Inuyasha visting his mother's grave was a good thing to do showing more of his sensitve side and also giving him time to think. The dream that Kagome had was a very good way to show how deeply she wants him, but could have been a little longer with some details. I say this because the way you describe Kagome in the first chapter of how much she wants him, you would think that she would have much more vivid dreams, not more sexual dream, but more sensual dream with Inuyasha more romantic and loving then he usaually would be making Kagome think it is a dream even more. The end of the chapter with Kagome receving the kimono kind was a good way of making Kagome think that Inuyasha likes her a little more then she thinks, and I hope as well that Inuyasha will come that night and move things a little faster. I am not saying I would like to see them mate the next chapter yet not drag it out over twenty-some chapters with them still in the same stage of thier relationship. Also it would be kind of cool if you had a side story involving Sango and Miroku and thier relationship, but you don't have to. If you have to include Kikyo in your story, no offense but could you please find some way to kill her off or something, I really hate her a lot. -Myanime Please update soon and if you want check out my stories (They're not as good as your stories but I try and would like some reviews)
| Reviewed By: Na (draechaeli) On: January 20, 2005 12:48 CST
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Umm.. I don't think I'm signed in oops. That was a good chapter. The whole kimono thing is intreaging (did I spell that right?). ~Na
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 11:15 CST
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won't he be gobsmacked to see her in that kimono?
| Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess not logged in On: January 20, 2005 10:44 CST
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I love this story and I can't wait for you to update again! I'm so excited to see what happenes when Inuyasha sees Kagome in the kimino he made for her.
| Title: Promontory!
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 09:59 CST
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What happened to "promontory"? That was the three dollar vocab word of the day! Anyway, another great update. I see that you managed to find that "magical stopping point" on your own just fine. I told you that you could do it. I particuarly like how Inuyasha recognizes the differences between love in the Sengoku Jidai verses love in Kagome's time. I like the mental image your words lended to the village children playing swords and shouting "Tessaiga!" as they idolized Inuyasha. I also liked your reasoning for Kagome's insistance on wearing her school uniform. All very great ideas, and I'll be waiting to see where you're going with chapter 3.
| Title: YoukaiMusashi
Reviewed By: YoukaiMusashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU GO,GIRL! You posted this incredible chap and you Know what I think of it! Wow and Perfect don't even begin to describe it ::bows:: This is just so Right, so sweet, wonderful from beginning to end and it will just get better and better, there's not a single doubt in my mind about that :) You talented girl you! I'm so glad you finally posted this! ::jumps up and down:: People just HAVE to read your work, you're just so amazingly talented and all I can say is Thanks for sharing! :D btw, I added your stories to my faves, but that doesn't come as a surprise to you, ne? :) I luv u girl! ::hugs:: I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!!! (see, I didn't say 'you so totally rock' in this review... um...nevermind) And thanks for mentioning me there! Wow! ::blush:: I'm so not worthy! But I try, dear, I do try :) And it's all thanks to you, so there, I can embarrass you in my reviews too :) As always, amazing story, amazing talent, wonderfully beautifully written, incredibly intense and simply...Perfect :) Your biggest fan from Argentina, YM
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 20, 2005 00:59 CST
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Ah, InuYasha has gone to his mother's grave for some quiet reflection. Hehe, "getting soft..." Kagome's influence is showing and he knows it. He also doesn't seem too upset about it. ---- How sweet, Kagome is tickled pink over the kimono InuYasha had made for her in secret. Very WAFFy.
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