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Reviewed By: S On: September 09, 2005 20:49 EDT
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Oh my. I never thought that Caden-san would hide the map somewhere like that! Vash-kun's idea to pretend to sleep with that whore was an excellent idea. Bad on his move, but it held with the story and made it that much more interesting! My, my, how the tables have turned. Meryl-san doesn't even know she's hurting Vash-kun because she doesn't know he saw Caden-san 'kiss' her. Vash-kun doesn't know that Caden-san and Meryl-san aren't lovers. It's all a tangled up mess of miscommunication- and how will this latest mess get straightened out? I wonder if Knives-kun (He seems so lieable now I just can't call him '-san' anymore, but don't tell him that!) will tell Vash-kun what actually went on. He may just let his brother sort it out because Vash-kun got himself into this mess. Who knows? Maybe this will give Vash-kun the push he needs to talk to Meryl-san honestly.\ Until next time!
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 17:32 EDT
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*Sigh* I know that it makes the story more interesting, hence I am still here, but dammit, I wish they would kiss and make up. Thanks again for another awesome chapter that makes me want to read more. . .
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Reviewed By: Aaml4everFC On: September 05, 2005 04:32 EDT
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Im not going to write a very long review this time, the first and foremost reason being that its 4:39 am and it's a school day. I absolutly loved this chapter!I dont know what darkflameangel's problem is but if a girl came up to me like Vash had done, I would've been all for it. Im looking forward to seeing caden start "wooing" milly as well as the wolfwood/Rem pairings. Im soo looking forward to finding out what kind of idea the gunman has come up with this time^^ ~Aaml4everFC
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Reviewed By: S On: September 03, 2005 22:11 EDT
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Gomen nasia! I haven't been able to read or review for a while, but I must say things are coming along nicely! I totally believed the way Meryl-san acted when Vash-kun and Caden-san fought. Vash-kun even apologized to her afterwards! I do wonder what Vash-kun is hiding up his sleeve. Will he attempt to push the 'I-no-longer-care-for-you-and-am-now-a-womanizer-worse-than-ever-before' charade to teh limits? Will Meryl-san break down and go to him? Ah, choices, choices... The hint about Caden-san and Milly-chan's possible romance was very micely done. You haven't neglected Knives-san and Mac-san either. Now, if only Meryl-san and Vash-kun got their acts together... A wonderful chapter, as always!
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 01:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say how much I love reading your story. I'm looking forward to next weekend!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 00:18 EDT
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hhaa....i didnt want to surprise you to much so i didnt log in...ok so its cause i am lazy but...hmmm, my comments for this chapter. Yep, if some man tried to get back with me like vash is acting with meryl there would so be some serious castration with a dull wooden spoon going on. i think milly should whip out a WWE smackdown on Vash. Oi...wheres the fluff? My VERY hopeless romantic side needs some attention(especiall since there seems to be an influx of attractive man-like creatures on campus this year..eh probably all pricks though..just my luck). wow..that was an interesting Caden inspired rampant image(hentai) that just flitted through my head..i need to get out more. yea...MM is definately a strange creature..thank goodness for update emails again! woot. OMG...people agree with me... im sooo proud! (bows) me loves the story...im all for a rem/wolfwood pairing...the whole badboy reformation thing...yep, hopeless romantic strikes again. Hmmm...Caden needs to get to "wooing"(woo, what an interesting word) our dear Milly...well i better go before my review gets any stranger. Ja ne~ DFA
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Reviewed By: Miss_Neno On: September 01, 2005 23:43 EDT
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^__^= Another wonderful chapter. I'm totally addicted, but sometimes I just can't believe how much of an idiot Vash is. *sighs* Although, I suppose jealously might work for some women... I'd personally rather be wooed, though. ^__^= It's still very enjoyable to read, though, please keep up the good writing!
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Reviewed By: Amie On: August 31, 2005 00:57 EDT
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I had to hunt Forever Mine down at ff.net! What was with MM.org?? Glad to see you've updated here, too. :-) Vash, why are you such a jerk? Why are you so adorable? No wonder Milly has to smack you around. As always, great chapter. I love when Vash talks to Wolfwood, too! ::sniff:: Thanks for writing! Thanks for updating so quickly, too! It's very much appreciated.
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Reviewed By: lovagirlalot [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 03:50 EDT
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sorry forgot to tell you it's me K9Gmilly.
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Reviewed By: lovagirlalot [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 03:49 EDT
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i think i owe you five reviews. this fic is so intresting. cant wait until next week but until then. Ta tah for now ps: i just love this story.
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 11:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I owe you two reviews here - is V an idiot or what?!?! I almost feel sorry for M, but then neither one of them are great at speaking their minds... especially where the other is concerned. It is good to see that at least K is restrained a bit! :) Until next week...
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Reviewed By: Aaml4everFC On: August 27, 2005 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had to write the word REALLY in bold, now im really really anxious for the next chapter to come up. And yes even though I will not admit it I am totally hooked into the story, I even check back in here everyday to see if it has been updated, even though I know that it hasnt. That is how good this story of yours is. Vash is being such an A-hole, even i felt like smacking him over the head when he pulled that stunt with the blondie. Oh and i hope that Meryl will turn the tables on Vash cause he definetly deserves it for acting like such a prick as DarkFlameAngel put it. A great way to get back at him would be to play on his fear of losing Meryl by her going along with Caden and try to make Vash jealous, that would show him^^ And I would like to see some more fluff as well. R u going to start up a little Wolfwood+Rem pairing, cause that would give Milly the chance to get hooked up with Caden. And yes I remember the good ol' days, things used to be soo much more simple you didnt have to worry your @$$ off about making the grades or having to worry about your social status *sighs* yes those were the days,well enough reminising I will keep checking up on the story each step of the way, as well as constantly writing reviews to make sure that you are rightfully motivated to continue on with the story. Well anyway Good luck with the next chapter I hope that it lives up to our expectations of you^^ just kidding. I hope that this chapter will be just as good as the rest of the story |
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 00:32 EDT
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actually i did get pictures of the one biker...mind you, i look like crap in the picture. i think i might be able to find more pictures with a rurouni kenshin...if not...well lets just say i shall be creative. oooo...vash is being a prick and its so gonna back fire on him. i see pain in the future for tongari. hmmm...is our dear wolfwood becoming smitten with rem? if so then that leaves the field wide open for milly to get it on with a certain chaotic fellow.lol...yea..wheres the fluff? I need some fluff in my life to offset the horrors of school. ooo the youngest is in kindergarten...woot no kids in the house. ahhh the easy days of kindergarten...fingerpainting, recess...ah to be young again. wells i better get to doing something...like downloading that episode of bleach...interesting series, still ambivilant about it. Keep up the good work and i put in my request for fluff( and more caden moments...what can i say, he intrigues me) Ja ne~ DFA PS...ha im signed in *does happy sign in dance*
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Title: Rockin' good chapter!
Reviewed By: Amie On: August 26, 2005 21:07 EDT
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Really busy getting prepped for school and saving this as a treat! Worth the wait! I'm glad that Caden feels protective of Meryl and Milly. I loved the part where Meryl says that she's done dumber things...funny, but sad, too. I can't wait for them to really get reunited, but I suppose you will torture them along the way in your usual entertaining manner! Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 09:30 EDT
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That is not how a reunion should go. When's chapter forty nine going to be coming out? (I'm reading both versions of your story. The one at FanFicion.net, and the one here. You might know me better as Vampirebaby13).
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