"The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maddi On: August 25, 2007 11:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I was so pleased that you finally updated but, I wasn't too happy about the whole Kurama/Jo bet thing. Kurama is an amazingly experienced 1000 year old fox that could easily do better than some human in any sexual task, or at least, that's how he was portrayed in the earlier chapters of your story. It was a little disappointing but, I'm still thrilled with the update. Great job!
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Title: 2 questions Reviewed By: Sprinda [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 21:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok make it three When is Yusuke's demon coming out When is Yusuke going to do the 2nd half of kurama's punishment? Is Yusuke's demon (if u write it if not then read this question) going to submit to Yoko?
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Reviewed By: cathappy On: August 08, 2007 22:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: what can i say? what i can say is this damn hot, sexy, funny, i dont want to stop and please keep wrighting, this to good o be true am i in heaven or hell? please more master please
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 12:16 CDT Comment/Review: That was awesome! mm what a way to end it. with those peeps
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Title: Dear GOD! Reviewed By: bwlj On: July 30, 2007 19:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well... this was certainly surprising. I had to reread the whole story to refresh myself with the plot. And well, I have to applaud you for this lengthy chapter, though long, it was very very good. Thank you so much for not forgetting about the story and all of the fans that enjoy it. I can not wait for more of the story. Forever a fan. ~bookwormloverjen
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 01:28 CDT Comment/Review: omg.. o_o 60 some pages. Thats insane. But it was oh so worth it. Kurama getting bested by a human. I bet he's angry. So is Hiei going to start going out with Jo? Anyway, I'm so happy you updated. Glad your muse is back from vacation. =D
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Reviewed By: XinnLagjin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 01:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It is my firm belief that you are one sick pup. That was so erotic that I'm going to need three months worth of cold showers and theropy for the rest of my life. To say the least this update more than made up for the wait. So is Yusuke's demon side going to be submissive to Yoko?
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Title: Review for chapter 10 (Bottom's Up) Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 23:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I totally adored this chapter. Especially how you included Jo. He is so hot as a sub, and, furthermore, provides a wonderful new outlook on the reikai tantei. In this case, a worshiping, yet very curious outsider's perspective. I hope Jo will continue to be a semi-permamanent or truly permanent fixture. He really needs someone like Hiei, and it would do Hiei good to take care of someone like that. Now. Onto *shudder* -plot-. I'm absolutely thrilled you gave a nod to Sensui and Sniper, but now that you've done it, you may wish you hadn't opened up that can of worms. Because now, I'm willing to give up a great deal of the lemons to read the ENTIRE SENSUI story arc over, in your voice, just so that I can see how these new relationships affect what happens during that time. Also, it would give you a chance to show how others will react to the new relationships in the tantei. How will Kuwabara react? What about Koenma, Yukina, Genkai, Boton? Will the psychics they meet react any differently? What about that one curly-blonde psychic they brought back? Didn't Sniper kill him? Will they be able to save him this time around? (Also, I am feeling a bit guilty, admitting to wanting to check in on Kuwa-chan/baka in lieu of steamy tantei sex. Kuwa is very adorable but very, -very- dumb.)... ... ... And what about afterwards, in the Makai arc? I'm assuming that Yusuke tops Kurama, Youko tops Yusuke, and Toushin tops Youko? How are they going to handle the politics this time around? What will happen to Jo when they all leave? Will he be bereft of anyone for three whole years? He would feel so abandoned. Speaking of Jo, are the three tantei going to eventually clue him in on their secret lives? Tomorrow, Yusuke promised to go to school, so you have to at least mention that. And further, when is Kurama's mother coming home and how will she handle Yusuke moving in with them? How will Kurama bring up the subject with her? ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... Oh, and last but not least, your lemons are the hottest thing since the supernova. Please write more of them. Please write more of this. And please write more of them in this. ... ... ... ... Thanks for writing, Kin Pandun.
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Reviewed By: LadyShadowDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 23:04 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Wow, that update was worth waiting for. What's going to happen with the lost bet? Hope you update again.
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Reviewed By: k-girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 13:54 CDT Comment/Review: please update soon
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Reviewed By: k-girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 00:57 CDT Comment/Review: have you forgoten this fanfic? please update soon!!!
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Title: NNNNNNOOOOOO Reviewed By: Sprinda [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 20:20 CST Comment/Review: please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update
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Title: wow! Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 23:18 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i've passed over this one for quite a while, but curiosity got the better of me... and im glad it did XD.9 chapters of full blown all out lemony goodness *well 8 1/4, chap 1 was more like orange soda than lemon :P*,AND its not the typical HieixKurama stuff, wow! *i love that pairing,but its good to get a break once in a while*. i especially love wen yusuke fucks kurama unconscious n hiei shows up... i fell out the chair laughin @ that one ^_^.good job, i'm officially hooked! *smut is better with boys ^_~ *
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 22:55 CST Comment/Review: HOLY SHITZ! O_____________________________________O I never seen this story before, so I read cause the pairing was my favorite and it intrested me. When I finished reading it, by the way it took me five days read this story, I was like "OMFG! This story is so hot. Even that threesome was even hotter than anything else!" This story of yours is so fucking awsome! *grabs author by the shoulders and shakes her* UPDATE YOU! UPDATE NOW! I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 17:20 CST Comment/Review: It's okay Just make sure the Chapter is a good one. I looked for Bathroom Break on AFF.net but I can't find it!
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