| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 29, 2005 20:32 CST
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SO SAD SO SAD SO SAD will someone please tell me that the fact that mating with a youkai will help this problem. If he marks her like Inuyashaa was going to have to do with Kagome then they will share blood and youkai don't get desieses...as far as i know that should help and take care of this. WAAAAA wont some one go talk to them. come on Kagome use your Miko abilities to sence Toga need help 'Orion :(
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Title: I didn't want my hunch to be right...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 29, 2005 19:47 CST
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There you go...making me cry again. --- Knowing they will be together in the end doesn't help right now. Not knowing what they will have to go through to get there is agonizing. I won't speculate, you have your plans and will reveal them when you're ready. I can still hurt for them in the meantime. *cries* Poor babies!!
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai(not signed in) On: January 29, 2005 19:00 CST
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sorry about that last review, I was in a bit of an emotional shock. I get really in tune with the characters whenever I read a well written story with as much detail as this, so I can almost feel Toga's pain. I know that feeling all to well, you just want to run to the edge of the world, where no one can see you, and no one can hear you screaming your lungs out because you're so torn up inside. I felt that way when my grandmother died. I've never been able to figure why I get so attached to stories, I just do. but then again, I'm not exactly normal either, I have ADHD, bi-polar, and occasional depression. I think of stories constantly in my head as well. Well anyways, I adore this story, and I think you are an astounding writer, all I can really ay is, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 18:33 CST
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Aww. Feel so bad for them. And yet another beautifully specially Sue angst filled chapter that we have all grown to love so much, te he he. And yet, the q&a's have left me filled with so much hope.. I'm just jealous that I didn't think of their questions first. To quote you: "As far as hanyou blood? I can't answer that … yet …" hehehehehe. Why not yet? Even if we all pout really hard at the same time? hmm, maybe this calls for an intervention of Kagome and Inuyasha making a trip to Chicago to talk some sense into everyone? And while they're at it they can swing by my favorite swimsuit boutique, Londo Mondo, and pick up my order so I don't have to wait for it to be shipped that would be PERFECT! hehehehe. Or if not maybe they could at least stop by because their suits are fabulous, lol. One final thought: I bet Sierra's just dying to try on that ring. *wink* PS-- Loved it, always do, need more, take care, and loved it again ------Aitu
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Title: but...
Reviewed By: Kyonarai(not signed in) On: January 29, 2005 18:22 CST
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HOW...WHY...what the...Oh I'm so confused, this has to be some kind of sick joke, this is a joke right? Sesshomaru changed the results or something...this...this cant be right...I really feel like crying, there is this feeling in my stomache right now...it's just got to be WRONG!!!! they messed up, they had to, damn doctors, they always mess up right? Right? Oh, my head hurts... PLEASE don't make me wait long for the next chapter, please, this just has to be wrong...
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Reviewed By: mmmmmsubway15 On: January 29, 2005 18:17 CST
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Noooooooooooo! THE ANGST....the EVAAAAL EVAAAAL angst has finally hit us with a vengence. I can totally understand poor Sierra's pov on it though. I wouldn't want to do that to someone I loved, ESPECIALLY someone who I knew had so much more time to live then I could ever even DREAM about. But....if you THINK about it....maybe she COULD be selfish and spend her time with him...it would only be a small portion of HIS life....like a couple months for us....but ....they wouldn't be able to be mates which he apparently can't handle...anyway....I am babbling again. A beautifully written and touching chapter...the emotion was overwhelming. Keep up the nice job
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Title: Heart breaking
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess not signed in On: January 29, 2005 18:13 CST
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This chappie was truly heart breaking...I loved it. So...Sad yet...Perfect. Wonderful.
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 00:11 CST
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poor toga, too bad I already started to read purity 3, b/c I know that they are going to be together, but the kicker is finding out if she does have it and they decide to be together anyway... I was in love once, and despite how much it hurt when it went away, I wouldn't give up that love to have not had the pain for anything in the world; so I hope that even if it turns out that she has the gene that they get together anyway...anywho- I'm everyehere tonight...giggles :)
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 27, 2005 22:13 CST
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sits babbaling incoherently in worry for them. Scary test scary test scary test. I'm guessing Toga is going to be near by even though she asked to go alone. and did Toga sense her mood? I want to believe thats why he called. Orion
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Title: Uh oh....
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 27, 2005 21:54 CST
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The doctor's office finally called...and made her an appointment. That's not good. If it was negative, they could easily have said so over the phone. I got a bad feeling about this. I'll keep my fingers crossed.
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 21:26 CST
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**Snif** Ok, now you started me crying and I'm a wreck. (Pregnant women have a right to be emotional, right??? ~_^) **take's a good breathing to calm self** It's tearing me appart what they are living through. And to know that they are together in P3:F, just can't help: You wrote a mean cliffy here and I'm loving it. Ha! the pain of knowing we'll have to wait a couple of days before you update this story: evil, just plain evil you "satin" ;-) LoL But will Toga follow her without her knowing it? Just to be sure that she's safe? Or let her go alone, him being at work but not able to concentrate and snapping at someone? Don't stop! MouF
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: January 27, 2005 21:24 CST
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Ah, finally decided to play catch up on my reading and my oh my, what a catch up it was! I loved how Toga proposed to Sierra-- it seemed to mirror how Inuyasha would have handled things too- hehehe. And oh that damn doctor! I want to know nnoooooowww, te he he. This has just put me into quite the giggley mood-- especially the revier Q&A-- Kagome the miracle worker.. `magic life extending device', the thought of Toga's photo's somehow escaping the apartment, hehehe. Loves it. Keep up the great work-- I can't want to see what is instore for us-- until then I'll remain tense! buh-bye! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 18:49 CST
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Gods, if I didn't bite my nails already, I'd be tearing them to the quick over the results. I really hope Sierra's negetive...then we'd just have to worry about Sessy's approval. Hmmm...right now I'm trying to figure out what's worse....
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 17:24 CST
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NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Evil Evil Cliffy! i can't believe you ended it there! Pls update before i go crazy! Remember that my sanity is on the line here!
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Title: I require the rest of this story or I will go insane...
Reviewed By: Kyonarai(not signed in) On: January 27, 2005 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i need the next chapter, i don't just want it, I NEED it! it's like a neccesity of sanity...god you write so well, it kills me when I have to wait for each new chapter, you do such a good job!
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