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| "Trans-Plantation" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you have some great things here developing in the story. a lot of people brought into one chapter but i'm sure that will space out over time. love the choice in music and yash's profession (mmmm grease monkey yash) good choice. i was a littel confused when Kagome kissed him, rather brash but she is a very go at it girl, which is good cause a lot of people won't hit on it. very good. oh, yeah, bt the confusion...it was like one minute they were at the table then outside. wans't sure if i missed something...all i coudl think of was 'god what an impression on the aunt.' but honestly, you have a great thing here. good luck with it!
| Reviewed By: InuFan91 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I hope you will continue it so that I can read the rest of it and find out what happens. I think you should get an award or something cause this is the best one I've read other than 2. But definatly the best on this site. I hope you will update soon. Ja ne
| Reviewed By: u_b_san On: November 24, 2004 01:01 CST
Comment/Review:
awsome story update!!!
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