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Title: update!!!!
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: June 05, 2005 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like that chappie!! You better update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Yea yea its Full_Blue_Moon who 4got to sign in again On: May 27, 2005 23:06 CDT
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Yea so as i read on to the other chapters i notice you do get more detailed but still i think there needs to be more at the beggining. Becaues Real Inu would most likely be terriorising her when they 1st meet and Kag, would not give in so easily...but still great idea and i realy do like it just more details? PLZ!?
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Title: Cool but...
Reviewed By: Full_Blue_Moon i 4got to sign in On: May 27, 2005 20:17 CDT
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OKAY! i don't wish to be mean but you need to slow down everything is happening tooooooo fast and you need more detailes and everything but still a VERY good idea and i really like it when people have long, flowery chapters with lots of details!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: May 09, 2005 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a funny chappie!! Kee sounds like an evil bitch,just like Narku and Kikyo. Uhhhh!! How I hate that walking dead clay corpse son of a fucking bitch!!! Oh, oh dearie me must of lost my temper,what did I say? *starts reading* OMG!!! I said that!! EVen though that does describe Kikyo I can't believe I said that!!! Oh well. Goodbye,I'll rember you all in theropy!! *smiles and then walks out of the room laughing like a crazy person.
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: kagome182005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Jin Ryu (not signed in) On: April 11, 2005 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome! I love the fluff. Keep it going!
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: kagome182005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE FASTER!!!! I mean it's not that i'm rushing you or anything it's just that i am rushing you. IT"S NOT MY FAULT THAT YOUR STORY IS SOOO GOOD!!! Gosh i am getting sleepy.....~_~ZzZzZ
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Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So this is my all time favorite fic of yours. It's the first one I read. I love your idea of having InuYasha full demon and Kagome half, so Kagome can hold her own but InuYasha's still more powerful. Really, really good fic! Please update soon!
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Title: I telling my mommy!! You story is to short!!
Reviewed By: kagome182005 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I love your story!! Hay is biting them to make them their mate really true cause I saw that idea inside other fanfics also.But anyway your story is so wonderful!! Please update I have deticaded my life to your stoy. (sorry 4 any miss-spelled words)
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (still NOT login) On: February 24, 2005 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*twitch* to short! *twitch* but its great!!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!!!!!
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Title: un-played
Reviewed By: elie3173 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, pleaz writ more as soon as possible. It isn't the same played out story line like most and it is completely un-OOC.
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Title: I liked this story please updata soon
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story because you put a great plot in it. Your spelling is getting so much better your story a growing they are just so enjoyable. I love reading your storys. I ive you these rating because the style of writing the you created works, your creativity is incredicable,and your ideas are the best.
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Title: Part Of The Pack
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 00:04 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a good idea for a story, but you're trying to move to fast. Pace yourself, let the characters unfold before throwing them into conflict. But please don't take this the wrong way, I also found the story to be intresting and it left me wanting more. You can try a trick one of my friends taught me, read the story out loud (I prefer to do this alone) but read it without thinking it's your story. Read it with the expections you have when reading anyother fic. That's the best advice I can give you. Over all you did a good job.
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