Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 20:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Every time a character speaks in text, you need to start a new paragraph. It is very hard to read a story that is one big paragraph. And its very bad grammer. You may want to try fixing it, get someone that has more experience to go over your work and help you out.
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