| "Unbalanced Pendulum" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 22:58 CST
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yet again, an amazing chapter. i wonder about what Kurama did, though, when he 'invoked The First'. from the outcome, it might not have been the best thing to do. but now, at least, we know what The First wants with Hiei. too bad he doesn't know the little demon very well.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 13:43 CST
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I like this chapter even more then the others. You use discriptions very well and should continue on with writting you own stories and maybe it could lead to a best seller.
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 16:28 CST
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OMG it's so beautifully written!!! When will there be more?
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 21:49 CST
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*falls down* you stopped it there... HOW COULD YOU???!!! *clears throat* Heh, sorry 'bout that, That was just a very bad(or good, depending if your trying for reader's interest or torturing already existing readers) spot to stop! ARG! That was just so frustarating, and now I need to know what happens next! Please! Update soon... For your reader's who are being driven insane with curiosity's sake....
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 18:24 CST
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another great chapter. i like how you have Kurama kinda freaked in this place & Hiei comforting him when neccesary. also, the story of the 1st ghoul was pretty cool. and him taking over Kurama made it even more interesting. can't wait for your next chapter when we meet this ghoul person. and hopefully we'll find out why Hiei can't become a ghoul, though i already have a guess. anywayz, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 01:13 CST
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great chapter there. i like how they're both wrestling with their emotions & their intentions, or in Hiei's case his natural instinct of mistrust. i can't wait for the next chapter. i'm really curious about this area now. update soon!
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Reviewed By: buenagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Blade99507 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 22:12 CST
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Wonder ful i love it keep writing hiei and kurama rule i enjoy this fic very much your a great author
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! For what it's worth, I believe you have the right mixture of explanation of what the characters are thinking and actions which, to a degree show the same. Hiei's problem with rain and relative youth is beautifully described, but Kurama's thoughts as he unfolds his plan, (knowingly) lies to himself, and perhaps, starts to change his mind (or not) is fascinating and all so well in character for the older, multilayered thief. More soon please.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 23:33 CST
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okay. weird chapter. kinda lost there.... update soon, & please explain a little.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really great. you have both Kurama & Hiei exactly right. it seems almost perfect. i love how you have Youko being bound by one of his more admirable traits; his honor. Kuronue's death even happened perfectly. Kuronue initiated it, Hiei didn't stop him. it's all flowing so well. keep it up & update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 18:32 CST
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Grat update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 16:45 CST
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Awesome! I really liked the metaphor at the begining of the chapter about the spider. It painted a vivid picture. The suspense is killing me... I love the way you created this world they're in. It is so like our own in earlier ages and the Yu Yu Hakusho Makai, and yet it is so very different. God speed writing the next chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 15:34 CST
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I love it. This is one of the best fics around. You discribed eavery charcter beautifully and showed things that even the creater could. Beautifule just beautiful! *claps*
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay. ^_^ As always, I love your writing. (I don't know if I've ever told you that before.) You were right, this stands well on it's own. All of the plot and ideas, it's very clever. The way Hiei got Kuronue to kill himself, that was smart, though cruel. Please update a little faster next time, if you can. ^_^ *hides* and I'll try to get around to reviewing more often.
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