| "Till the gods bring us apart" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: skaterpg guy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is GOOOOOOOOD! I cant wait for more.
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Title: PLEASE!
Reviewed By: Genaric Person On: March 04, 2005 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE FIX YOUR GRAMMAR this isnt a flame, but please you keep saying WAS instead of WERE, its getting very tiresome and making the characters too OC please fix it
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Reviewed By: wynter89 (mm) On: February 01, 2005 18:52 CST
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not naraku anything but him. anyway i loved it u have got to update soon. i want to know what would happen in the later chaps GOOD LUCK MAY KAMI-SAMA BE WITH YOU!!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 31, 2005 23:56 CST
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Ewwwwww! Not him!! *gag* LOL
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting to see kagome as a demon. and the threesome thing was rather, umm, interesting. i know i'm a hentai, i'll admit it, but i'm proud of it. anywho, i really like your story and i hope you update soon. dammit, why can't i have sesshy? oops sorry, didn't mean to say that out loud. ummm, yeah, update soon.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story! You can hardly ever find stories where Kagome is paired with both Sesshomaru and Inuyasha! It always make things interesting. I can't wait to see how things turn out between them. Will Kagome be mating with the both of them voluntarily any time soon? And what's up with the demon that possessed Kagome and Naraku? That was what confused me. Please update soon! Its been almost a month since your last update...
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 02:03 CST
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Ah, a succubus...that was Naraku's playtoy at one time...ewwwwww! Poor Kagome. All those nasty memories...how will she ever accept everything that has happened?
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Title: Till The Gods Bring Us Apart
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 22:37 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Til The Gods Bring Us Apart
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 22:52 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: songiesworld [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 00:52 CST
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I so totally love your story and can't tell you how much I can't wait for it to be updated. Please continue the good work. This story is very addictive. ^_~ Songie
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 22:11 CST
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Poor Kagome is starting to remember the slutty binge she has been on...and now she's tormenting Kouga (although as stubbornly persistant as he is, he kinda deserves it). I still can't wait to find out how InuYasha and Sesshoumaru came to the shocking decision of sharing Kagome as a Mate. "Sharing"...it just boggles the mind. And how being possessed by a youkai/demon changed Kagome physically like that. At the most, I would think that she would be considered Hanyou. Or like Naraku (ick) a created/contrived hanyou. She shouldn't be considered full Youaki, but that's my opinion. I'm sure you have an explanation. ----You have my curiosity roused.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oo (made to represnt eyes) WOW!!! that was great! excellent basis for a story. you got me intrested. wow, really great lemon. what a pair to be stuck between (i would die a happy person a thousand times over for that one) excellent story idea. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 19:39 CST
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damn that's some prologue
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Reviewed By: songiesworld (not logged in) On: November 26, 2004 23:27 CST
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Your story is starting out good so far and I can't wait to see what happens next. I am putting it on my faves list. ^_^ Keep up the good work. Songie
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW kagome is a demon!!! please update soon it was getting good
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