| "Lustful Cravings" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 15:19 CST
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I'm not a particular fan of rape, but I can stand it in your fic. I'd love to see the developments between Yuugi and Yami no Yuugi. By the way, 'Ryou' is common used to refer to the millenium ring-spirit's lighter side--almost all the time in fanfiction. Bakura is used as the name for the spirit that resides in the ring. The names were switched around, which is kind of confusing, but it was a great lemon. Are you sure you haven't written more of these?
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 10:25 CST
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Poor Yugi...I feel so sorry for him... It's a little confusing though, but I bet it'll be explained, right? Anyways, I liked the chappie with Ryou and Yami Bakura. Ryou is who you're referring to as the Hikari and Bakura as the Yami, right?
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Reviewed By: bakuragirl On: December 01, 2004 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best lemons i've read. please write the bakura and ryou lemon soon.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 22:25 CST
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What, aren't you going to update? C'mon, you gotta have more than just that!
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Title: part2
Reviewed By: reviewernumber673124 On: November 29, 2004 20:08 CST
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(I misspelled the word sympathize, sorry, my first language isn't English). Now, the god things: it's really refreshing to se Yami as the "mean" one. I'm kind of tired of seeing him as the oh-so-fucking-good one. I like the idea, you should polish it so you can make one kick-ass story. Good luck with this.
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Title: part1
Reviewed By: reviewernumber673124 On: November 29, 2004 20:02 CST
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I think that the last chapter was a bit too short for my liking. I would have prefered more decriptions of Yugi's feelings while Yami was raping him (I love him suffering!), of the enviroment, of the act itself, etc. It helps to uderstand clearly what do you want to express. I didn't really get the way you want us to see Yami. It was kind of ambiguous. I mean, when you read a story you always simpathize (or not) with the characters, and in this case I don't know what to think of him really.
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Title: Gah!!
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah!! (okay that was my reaction to Yami raping Yugi) But actually I'm intrigued by all this, I can;t wait to find out what happens next. Like just a random thought but why does Yami always assume that Yugi will be freaked out, that he has sexual feelings about him, or that he may love him( I just noticed that alot from reading different fics). Anyway can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Savanna On: November 27, 2004 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good so far. Don't stop. I want to find out what happens. PLEASE continue!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lola253 On: November 27, 2004 09:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting start. ^_^ I like it so far.
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