| "Best Laid Plans" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious (not logged in) On: June 21, 2005 19:14 EDT
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Tee hee. Poor, poor Yuusuke, always getting the short end of the stick. *tsks* Beautiful addition, as always. I especially loved the retelling of Kagome reaching for the "echo" of Kurama's soul. *blissful sigh* I eagerly await more delicious chapters, my dear, possibly more eagerly than I await more BAON chapters...for reasons I'm sure you're aware of. *glomps* Love yooooooou! I'll be sure to send more snarky Hiei muses and guruguruguru-ing Jagan your way~! ... Because I love you. Yeah. It has nothing to do with the fact that I'm a closet sadist. ... guruguruguru
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 21, 2005 19:09 EDT
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scary. So Ièm confused, is Kagome married to Hojo right now, or is Hojo married to Eri?
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Reviewed By: Stefni [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 00:46 EDT
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What a wonderful start!! I'm assuming the miko is Kagome, so who is it that's talking to her? Is it Youko? Is that why Kurama recognizes the place? Please update soon.
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Title: V. Duzzel
Reviewed By: Vampire Duzzel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 22:24 EST
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I reaaaaaaaaaly love it so far, you've got me hooked! I am also currently reading your fic titled Par Tout Autre Nom, I just decided to take a little break, but I am at chapter 9, and I think that your fics are 1 of the 2 greatest writings that I have ever read, and once I'm done with Par, I can't wait to read more of your creative fics.
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Title: Best Laid Plans
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 20:24 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei, Kurama, and Kagome please.
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Reviewed By: leftenant On: March 21, 2005 03:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tell me you are continuing this, I love it I have to read more
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 22:31 EST
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Once again, Deviation, you have set me ROLLING in laughter! This is a VERY good start--I STILL love Par Tout ... By Any Other Name! Sorry, my French spelling isn't the best...Anyway! I adored the end of the chapter--not because it was over, but becasue I liked where you ended it with the irony of Mrs. Higurashi taking a single look at the three of them and calling for Kagome! SO funny! I LOVE the little jibes you pit against Hiei and Kurama...very funny, very believable! While I don't want BAON to end, when it does, at least I'll have this one to look forward to, right? Take care and the best of everything to come your way! Black Rose Lady red_flame204@hotmail.com
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Title: continue?
Reviewed By: smalfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 17:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do hope you plan on continuing this story...if only because you do the Kur/Kag pairing the best that I've ever read. Please, more? *whimpers* *begs*
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:35 EST
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OMG I love this stroy its great you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: Ryu Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 15:00 EST
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come on, please update? you know you wanna... even though you are writing BAON, its still okay....damn it!! UPDATE!! its a good plot, and the character development is really good.
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Reviewed By: Ninnikia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 16:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why would you leave it at that update update soon.
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Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: January 10, 2005 21:54 EST
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Duuuuuuuuuuuude!!!! Come ooooooooooooooooooooooooonnn!!!!! I can't believe you left us like that! So totally unfair! And it was even right at the point where we're all like 'Omigod its starting finally yes yes yes!!' The exact point where a story crossed the border into a crossover sends shivers of delight down our spines. (It's one of the main reasons we read crossovers in the first place) Soooo anyway, I like how its goin'. Hee, can't wait to see the mystery plot unfold. And that youkai in the park? Shippou, definately. Who else could it be? I mean, really. (It's totally like your style anyway) Yay, I've finally reviwed! It's been a loooong while. But I saw how many reviews you have for this story (*gasp*! Only 18!!), and decided I needed to put my two cents in. (Nuuuu! My last two cents!! Aww, there goes the last of my ever-elusive money! *sniff*) Hmm. I suppose I'll have to wait until you update again... Darn you and your slow-working brain! Spit out the goods! Pleeeeaaaasssseeee!!!! Hrmm. Meanie.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 21:46 EST
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Ugh... I meant Deviation... I guess this is what happens when you know someone's account name on two sites... *shrugs and hands you e-pocky to apoligize*
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 21:45 EST
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LOL. I can to really wait to see the way any of your stories turn out... So...Your chibi-muse seems to be right... a little. BAON and BLP are interesting enough... and with a dribble and drabble here on BLP you are certainly going to attract another impatient fan-following for this story... Oh well! BAON is top-priority right now! GO DEVIANT NATURE!
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 18:22 EST
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ur story is so cool u so need to update it
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