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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 22:31 EST
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Once again, Deviation, you have set me ROLLING in laughter! This is a VERY good start--I STILL love Par Tout ... By Any Other Name! Sorry, my French spelling isn't the best...Anyway! I adored the end of the chapter--not because it was over, but becasue I liked where you ended it with the irony of Mrs. Higurashi taking a single look at the three of them and calling for Kagome! SO funny! I LOVE the little jibes you pit against Hiei and Kurama...very funny, very believable! While I don't want BAON to end, when it does, at least I'll have this one to look forward to, right? Take care and the best of everything to come your way! Black Rose Lady red_flame204@hotmail.com
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Title: continue?
Reviewed By: smalfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 17:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do hope you plan on continuing this story...if only because you do the Kur/Kag pairing the best that I've ever read. Please, more? *whimpers* *begs*
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:35 EST
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OMG I love this stroy its great you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: Ryu Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 15:00 EST
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come on, please update? you know you wanna... even though you are writing BAON, its still okay....damn it!! UPDATE!! its a good plot, and the character development is really good.
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Reviewed By: Ninnikia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 16:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why would you leave it at that update update soon.
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Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: January 10, 2005 21:54 EST
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Duuuuuuuuuuuude!!!! Come ooooooooooooooooooooooooonnn!!!!! I can't believe you left us like that! So totally unfair! And it was even right at the point where we're all like 'Omigod its starting finally yes yes yes!!' The exact point where a story crossed the border into a crossover sends shivers of delight down our spines. (It's one of the main reasons we read crossovers in the first place) Soooo anyway, I like how its goin'. Hee, can't wait to see the mystery plot unfold. And that youkai in the park? Shippou, definately. Who else could it be? I mean, really. (It's totally like your style anyway) Yay, I've finally reviwed! It's been a loooong while. But I saw how many reviews you have for this story (*gasp*! Only 18!!), and decided I needed to put my two cents in. (Nuuuu! My last two cents!! Aww, there goes the last of my ever-elusive money! *sniff*) Hmm. I suppose I'll have to wait until you update again... Darn you and your slow-working brain! Spit out the goods! Pleeeeaaaasssseeee!!!! Hrmm. Meanie.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 21:46 EST
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Ugh... I meant Deviation... I guess this is what happens when you know someone's account name on two sites... *shrugs and hands you e-pocky to apoligize*
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 21:45 EST
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LOL. I can to really wait to see the way any of your stories turn out... So...Your chibi-muse seems to be right... a little. BAON and BLP are interesting enough... and with a dribble and drabble here on BLP you are certainly going to attract another impatient fan-following for this story... Oh well! BAON is top-priority right now! GO DEVIANT NATURE!
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 18:22 EST
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ur story is so cool u so need to update it
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Reviewed By: CraneCreator [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 02:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite an interesting start to a new fic. Once again you've created about a hundred questions in my head, but i wouldn't read if i got all the answers right away and that was a rather evil way to end it off and for that you have my sincere comliments. Thanks for the great work.
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 21:49 EST
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hey you why haven't you updated your story yet i want to know whats going to happen next so as soon as you can update the story. Ja Ne Airy
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (lazy) On: December 03, 2004 22:21 EST
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NNNNNOOOOOOOOO! your only 1 chapter in and already i'm dieing for another! (literally) It's really not even a cliff hanger! Well to me it is but only cuz i love Kurama and Kagome meetings. Is this a K/K fic? And my only geuss is that was Shippo against Yusuke but i doubt it cuz the usually more obnoxious, for lack of a better word. Pls try to update BAON atleast once in a way if you could. Good luck with the new story! (not that you'll need it)
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Reviewed By: Lraine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 03:19 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! What a great start! You've got me hooked and its only this first chapter. The tone youve set in the this chapter is intense at best and only promises to get better. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: LadyoftheWest [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 20:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I love BAON and this one has a great start!
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Reviewed By: grey tears *not logged in* On: November 29, 2004 00:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. It's nice to see another Kurama/Kagome fic out of you! =P Please keep up the good work!! And..err..maybe update soon? Because..I'm certainly..INTERESTED!
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