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| "The Amorous Adventures of Ayame the Ramen Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] | Title: Beyond Expectations...
Reviewed By: Hokage_sama On: February 09, 2023 11:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It had all the flavours in just the right amount, it was fun,
thrilling, suspenseful, romantic, and most of all, the endgame was
the one I wanted. It taught me some pretty good things and it made
me laugh so much. I loved and laughed with this story. Thank you
for writing and showing us your story.
| Reviewed By: iLoveKakashi On: September 05, 2009 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I luv this story!! It was funny when Sasuke brought the flowers to iruka for ayame and the a kid was like "look! That kid's got a crush on iruka sensei!!" LOL Awesome story. I thought ayame's going to end up with kakashi but then it was iruka. I mostly like the comedy parts of the story thanks for writing it!! :)
| Title: wow!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: water ghost On: July 15, 2006 23:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
man its awsome add more lemon plz i beg u plus the scenes and everything not by meaning perverted can u make an iruka/oc hentai or romance fanfic pl i got 2 know
| Reviewed By: Lain Silver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 12:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! I don't think I've ever laughed so hard! Ayame is a complete ditz...and Iruka and Kakashi aren't that smart either. And to top it off, every one was completly in character! I'm impressed! I bow to your comic greatness. *salutes*
| Reviewed By: zimori On: April 21, 2006 09:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best semi-lemon that i've ever read! :o When i first sat the story, i was like...kakashi and the ramen girl? then it was iruka, but either way i was in disbelief. i never thought about pairings that way, but you did a great job1 ^^
| Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Drak dragon star On: March 12, 2006 14:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update i read your story over 5 times in a row today please write more!! i love it! i love it!!
| Reviewed By: Sakura Trees On: January 25, 2006 19:51 PST
Comment/Review:
Great!!! i love it! more!
| Reviewed By: Sakura Li Samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 17:01 PDT
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwww more more!! and lemon!
| Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Sakura Li Samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 09:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
PMG that was funny as hell more please more! i wanna know what happen
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Niffyat On: July 09, 2005 23:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was awesome! I actually laughed out loud, which I rarely do, but I did several times. Yeah, as much as I love the guy, Kakashi was a bit of a ass, but he was still in character. He was a jerk, but it was not obviously deliberate; his actions and words were just like the show/manga. Your depcitions of the characters was very believable in my opinion. It was written in such a way that felt like it could be a sub plot to the show, like for example, how you used "guy" a lot. And I like how you showed the characters thoughts, like Iruka's on Kakashi or Sakura and Ayame's thoughts as they talked. Really, a great story, my only complaint is the ending felt a bit abrupt. But at least it was happy! Over all, 10 out of 10!
| Title: meh
Reviewed By: Ruby_1 On: January 14, 2005 22:21 PST
Comment/Review:
Well I liked the beginning, but why did you make Kakashi into such an ass? I mean we all know that he is kind of distracted, but he is cool. I liked your story, the thought of Ayami having an obsession that turned out to be dissapointing. But when she said that Kakashi was a boring noodle... well that was not my favorite part. Other than that, good job.
| Title: You saw episode 105 didn't you?
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 15:13 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic! Kakashi is cute, his voice, his face, everything! I just hope Naruto isn't dubbed... then his voice would be ruined!!!!! Anyway I guess you've seen the episode when Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke try to see Kakashi's face. Funny right? Yep, I know! I never laughed so hard during the whole show! Well other than the thousand years of pain gag... ^u^ Anyway, great fic update soon! I hope Ayame and Kakashi do get together! As much as I hate giving my man way... ^u^* JA NE! !!!
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