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Reviewed By: gurly_gurl On: November 30, 2004 04:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update!!!!!!!!!!!!inuyasha is a ass...... wo yea im drunk. haha please update!! great storie!!!!!!
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Title: Kewl
Reviewed By: CrystalEyedYasha(not logged in) On: November 29, 2004 22:18 CST
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Kewl, I have 9 reviews. I love you guys!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you have a good plan developed here. i feel bad for kagome, poor girl shouldn't have to take that crap. i cant' see yash though turning around to fall all over her. he seems to be so much of a jackass, even though she already has feelings for him. other reviewers are right, he doesn't deserve her without SERIOUS BEGGING!!!!! its also very wrong for a teacher to laugh at kids like that. i had a teacher, ironically by the name mr. lee, who did the same. xept he got his ass kicked for it later on. oh well, intresting story, has a lot of the 'she's all that' theory behind it, but thats great casue its KAGOME!!! hehe. keep it up, write more.
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Title: I luv it, I luv it, I luv it!!
Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 20:57 CST
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I luv this story!! PLEASE update soon! PLEASE!!
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Title: This F@$!ing ROCKS!
Reviewed By: KitsuneFox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay listen (eh heh read i guess) closely...Update your fic ASAP! If you don't I'll go bonkers! I love it! I bloody love it! And that's something coming from someone who isn't all that interested in high school fics. ~Luv from KitsuneFox De liver de letter de sooner de better de later de letter de madder I getter!
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: November 29, 2004 16:36 CST
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So far, I'm loving this fic! I feel so bad for Kagome, though. That Inuyasha is such a @#%*! You should have Sesshomaru pop up in the picture, go to the dance with Kagome, Inu would see what an idiot he was and what he's missing out on, and Kag and Sessh will live happily ever after! Inu doesn't deserve Kag. He's too mean for someone as nice as her. He doesn't deserve anyone! Anyway, no matter how you continue to write this fic, I can't wait till your next update! And if Inu and Kag do get together, I hope that Inu will be dragged through Hell and back before Kag agrees to go with him. In fact, the whole school should be jealous of her in the end, not for going out with Inu, but just for how nice and pretty she is. I hope that she'll be the envy of the entire school! I am so mad at Inuyasha! What a jerk!
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Reviewed By: Kikyohater#1 On: November 29, 2004 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm.... this could be a really great story. I know I loved the first chapter. Very original. Normally everyone says Kagome is the rich girl but here you turn the tables and make her poor. Claps for the author! Great chapter and I hope that you update really soon!!!!
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Title: Really great
Reviewed By: arch_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think ur off to a really great start and I can't wait to read ur next chapter.
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Reviewed By: MsMayhem On: November 29, 2004 13:43 CST
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Inuyasha is such a *?$& . I sincerely hope you plan to teach him a good lesson in this fic. Please don't let Kagome become a doormat! Let her show up the entire school. By all means let them be together, but he's going to have to show that he deserves it in the end!! I'm not trying to tell you how to write your fic, but I'm just throwing out my hopes for it! Please continue! I am intrigued!
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Title: Heylo^^
Reviewed By: AbuniKage On: November 29, 2004 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEYLO!!Pwease write da next chappie soon!!Dis story be da SHITNIZ!!O_O;;....^^;;;;
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Reviewed By: mkk78 On: November 28, 2004 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Start! Looking forward to more!
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