| "Seducing A Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: Bonnie n_n On: December 23, 2009 22:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm gonna be a straight shooter here and yep í'm a fanfic freak and i completely loved your writing so far i've read, it's always suspenseful and stimulating ;) Most Sincere Congrats and a Hundred Thumbs Up!!!
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Title: Should nothave read this at work..need a cold shower (or a good you know what..)
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only wish I could double my rating to 20! Only one other writes DBZ lemons at all close to being as good as yours (Pareathe). I write fics on here and AFF.net myself, but yours are THE BEST! I could read them all day, but the I might moan and get in trouble at work (HA!)
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Reviewed By: Lord_Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 18:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
*a silent bone chilling growl escapes his lips* Kakarotto's brat is dead... *narrows eyes*
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Title: Intense.
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been awhile since I have read this couple and you definately have talent! ^_^ This lemon is hot, stream, and a very enjoyable read all together. Bura
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Reviewed By: thoughts On: December 02, 2004 16:16 EST
Comment/Review:
Hmm.. I thought, a story by TemptingTemptation. Bra and Goten, not really interested in them but I know I'll like the story because of the author. Now I've read the story, I'm thinking ....what! You are stopping there? You can't stop there. What happens the next day? How does she explain this to Vegeta, Bulma and Trunks? How does Vegeta come to terms with being related to Kakarrot? What does Goten do when he finds out about the potion? Is he as easy going about it as Bra thinks he will be or is he angry? Does he get revenge? Or is he hurt by it? What do Vegeta and Bulma think of Bra's tactics? You can't just stop there! Please! :) P.S. I enjoyed the story (just in case you hadn't figured it out).
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Title: ohh yeahhh!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 04:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woohoo another great success! wow what a wonderful and romantic one shot! Bravo!!!!!! *waves flags* ^__^ What else can I say? YOU SO TOTALLY ROCK!!! BD
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 08:09 EST
Comment/Review:
.. :O Damn, I need a cold shower... Bugger the shower - I need BARDOCK!!! :D VERY intense lemon!! *Applauds*
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Title: BWAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The evilness! i love how you protrayed Bra, even though I don't even really read Bra/Goten fics. This was probably the second or third one I have read, but the only reason why was because you wrote it ;). I goto your website on a daily basis hoping that you have updated, and I saw that you did, but the stupid ass thing died on my like all geocities websites (believe me, I know how it feels. I have one myself). But anyhow, whenever your website died on me, I tried looking you up on here, and found you! YAY! I looked up "Tempest" but it didn't work, so I tried typing in "Lab Monkey". YAY, it worked! I am so happy. i have you in my favorites now, so I can look both places from now on, instead of just your website! Thank you for being one of my favorite authors, I just can't believe how good you are at writing! UPDATE LAB MONKEY AND AT ODDS AND ALL OF YOUR OTHER DBZ STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: You're amazing at this.
Reviewed By: (nsi) little me On: November 30, 2004 15:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, as always. You're a Hentai goddess lol :) Bows before you in deep respect~ *cackles*
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 13:03 EST
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hot damn! You write the best lemons in the world! And they're not PWPs--they're little stories that are specific to the Dbz world, and wow, this one was excellent! I always thought Goten was a little dumb for Bra, as much as I fancied that pairing...but you made it work so well! Great story! I want to give it a prize or some holiday cookies or something! (Bra & Goten! Trunks will be fine with it all--just wait til Vegeta finds out!)
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 10:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great.
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Reviewed By: Ginia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 03:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I 'stopped in' to catch up with Lab Monkey, I never expected to find such a fresh treat as this! An original get together, a wonderful tease, and a hot lemon... all in one delightful package. I hope you realize that I emailed you BEFORE you posted this? I'm such a greedy monster. Poor Trunks. I hope Bra was able to come up with a formula that had no nasty hangover type effects.
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Reviewed By: marron1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 01:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are one of my FAVORITE writers. I had to go take a cold shower after this one.
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Title: Nice job!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 23:40 EST
Comment/Review:
Well done Tempest!! I love your one-shots and this one with Bra and Goten was very well done.
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Title: Starslight (starbrella not signed on)
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 21:37 EST
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OMFG!!! This is awesome!!! I love this story! I just knew that Goten and Bra will be together one way or another...::snickers:: I can't believe BRa used such dirty tricks to get Goten though! lol.
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