| "Diamonds Are A Girl's Best Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: die4InuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very interesting plz keep going!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: February 10, 2006 16:11 CST
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this is a really cool story so far. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ej On: February 10, 2006 14:57 CST
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u suck. srry, good idea, bad flow. srry, but it seems so...stiff. luv ya! despite yur hate for me!
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Title: You Have Been Reviewed
Reviewed By: You Have Been Reviewed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is riddled from top to bottom with problems. From the listing down through the last page, technical errors run rampant. The most blatant problem is run-on sentences, but the errors run the gamut from simple comma faults to word useage errors to attempts to use flowery description that ends up mangling the meaning and flow of the sentence. This fic is listed as Romance/Hentai/Supernatural for the genres and Original for the type. It's an InuYasha fan fic, so it's obviously not an Original fic. I really, really wish someone would explain to writers exactly what an Original fic is - I didn't realize it was that hard to understand. I discovered after reading the story that the story summary is also deceptive; the way it read to me, it suggested a yaoi story with a Kouga/InuYasha pairing. Instead, the story continues down the InuYasha/Kagome path. Disclaimer: Roses are red, Violets are blue. I no own, so you no sue. Lovely - poetic baby talk in the first line of the fic. This is so promising for the quality of the story that it's probably turned off a number of potential readers already. A full moon shown down moon the beautiful landscape, caressing it with its unholy blue light. The full moon shone, the past tense of shine. Shown is the past tense of show. The full review of this fic can be found at: http://www.livejournal.com/users/uvebeenreviewed/2118.html
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Title: hurrie !!!!
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON !!!1 CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER !!!! KEEP ROCKIN IT
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 16:52 CST
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This story is awesome!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 11:09 CST
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this story rox! cant wait 4 future updates! wat happened?
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Title: Diamonds Are A Girl's Best Friend
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 23:01 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Diamonds Are A Girl's Best Friend
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 23:24 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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