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Reviewed By: FindaHappyPlace On: July 15, 2005 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW!!! That is and awesome story!! i love it... Ohh is there going to be any Kei Elora action... I want to hear more on this Elora character... And Kei is my fav pretear character... need i say that this is and awesome story... well keep going... i love it... and i want to see more Kei if it is okay... is it? huh is it... well your grammer needs just a little work... Sasame is the way it should be spelled not Sesame... oh well i can get over it.... Well ill see ya update later... Hannah aka FindaHappyPlace
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Title: WRITE MORE POR FAVOR
Reviewed By: Dreamgirllogan On: July 12, 2005 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just love this fanfic. please, write more about it. I want to know what happens next! Keep up the good work.
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Title: story in general
Reviewed By: _Sorami_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your plot line so far! It's really great. Though, in the beginning of Ch.13, you did confuse me when Brian was being attacked. But it all worked out. I especially like the Himeno/Hayate pairing. ^^ ~Glomps Life-size Hayate plushie and grins evilly~ ^^ Though you did spell Sasame wrong. You spelled Sesame (like the edible seeds). From what I've seen of the anime, the credits say it's spelled the first way, so yeah. Your chapter #'s were off. I don't know exactly when, but your numbers got off somehow...oh well... all in all, it's a very nice story, and I hope you keep writing it because I really love Pretear. It's a great show, and you make it all the better. And this is the first Pretear fic I've read, which is a double plus for you. I think I'm rambling, so I'll quit. But I really love it!
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Title: AWESOME!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nell~Bell On: July 03, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MOR!WRITE MORE!!! I'm soooo lovin' this ficcie here. I am now one of your loyal readers.*Sigh* I can't get enough of this, please finish another 5 chapters. Thanks Neko
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Reviewed By: lovegoddess567 On: July 02, 2005 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it. it's new exciing. please update asap
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Reviewed By: lovegoddess567 On: July 02, 2005 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it. it's new exciing. please update asap
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Reviewed By: thredaysgrac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story was quite interesting i have to say... but you got most of the phrases like Leafenia and Shins spell to make the vines come out is Reshelles....theres a site called that if you want to check it out...it can help you in spelling the names of things...but other than that your story line is awsome!
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Title: >.
Reviewed By: qing On: May 31, 2005 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wat happens next?!?! omg, i need 2 know~~~~~~~~~~ plssss update soon ^_^
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Title: ME!
Reviewed By: Ashlee On: April 03, 2005 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, Mary!!! What are you doing posting my story up here, anyway?!?!? HUH?! Lol, jk. Just thought I'd let you guys know that I'm watching what you say. And... Mary... you lost chapter three... HOW COULD YOU?! THAT'S THE BEST MAKE-OUT SCENE THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE STORY!!! Lol, jk. And Sorry if you guys don't like the story... it was kind of just a stupid inside friend thing... So if you don't like it, 'tis okay. lol. Peace out!
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Title: AND?!
Reviewed By: angel_archer_siren_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AND?! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT OFF THERE!!! WHERE'S THE NEXT PART *STRANGLES YOU* I WANT THE NEXT PART!!
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Reviewed By: Hamdarko On: March 21, 2005 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic, I hope that you keep writing and updating it. I think that you captured Himino and Hayate's relationship perfectly.
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Title: READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Elizabeth On: February 19, 2005 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its SO awsome!! I really like romance fanfics. Its also really interesting and i read word for word and i did not find a mistake like i see in most.I cant wait till the next chapter! It had better be done soon or ill get impatient. Im Your Fan!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST FAN FIC EVER!!!!!!!!
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Title: READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Elizabeth On: February 19, 2005 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its SO awsome!! I really like romance fanfics. Its also really interesting and i read word for word and i did not find a mistake like i see in most.I cant wait till the next chapter! It had better be done soon or ill get impatient. Im Your Fan!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST FAN FIC EVER!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: supermooncrisispower_gal On: February 09, 2005 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing!! One of the best Pretear fanfics ever!!! Please update!!
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Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 00:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I like! Update this really soon! You've written it very well
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